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(C92) [SHAY-CONE (Poccora)] OSHIRI MANIAX (Fate/Grand Order) [English] [Coffedrug]

(C92) [SHAY-CONE (ぽっこら)] OSHIRI MANIAX (Fate/Grand Order) [英訳]

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Posted:2017-12-11 05:15
Parent:1153690
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Language:English  TR
File Size:78.17 MB
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Posted on 11 December 2017, 05:15 UTC by:   Coffedrug    PM
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Fixing some mistakes of my spanish translation (with english is more easy to translate this one)

Then again, english isn't my native lenguage, so if there's mistakes, please be nice and just mark them out (A charitable soul offered itself as a proofreader, but it has yet to answer me u.u)

Fixed errors Thanks to Teh_Red_Guy :')
Posted on 11 December 2017, 04:48 UTC by:   Teh_Red_Guy    PM
Score +35
More Scathach is always good tbqh,everyone would agree,especialy when you wake up and see this :D

Pg.11:"It's still stucked in my throat">"It's stuck in my throat"

Pg.14:"I'ts hitting very deep",it's ok,but it would look better if it was "It's hitting deep inside me"
Also,on the "You're not done cumming",you could put a "yet" between "cumming" and the comma,it helps the flow.and the "hard" next to boner is a bit uneccessary,tbh,it's a boner,ofc it's hard :P
For the "My ass' tightness" part,it would look better like if it was like "My ass is pretty tight,so I don''t know what could happen".

Pg.18:"Cumming" should be changed with "Cum"
Also,"by squeezing out all the semen in there" is better than "squeezing out all the semen there"

Pg.19:"took","take" is the correct one

I accept credits,keep up the good job LUL
Posted on 11 December 2017, 05:01 UTC by:   l337t3r    PM
Score +44
God bless more poccora
Posted on 11 December 2017, 05:26 UTC by:   gansta    PM
Score +53
Thanks for doujin
Posted on 11 December 2017, 05:38 UTC by:   the13thArcana    PM
Score +20
I love you coffeedrug! Hope you get Ereshkigal this Xmas

Also still open for application? Would love to proofread
Posted on 11 December 2017, 06:16 UTC by:   Coffedrug    PM
Score +27
I didn't get sheba, my chocolate thicc caster... so my xmas is looking bad!!! T_T_T_T_T

And what application? XD just send me a PM, if a I have a script I'll let you know, what do you think?
Posted on 11 December 2017, 06:33 UTC by:   gweh    PM
Score +35
>Pussy is in battle position!
>Pussy let out a howl! Pussy used Grind Riding EX!
>Your offpussy hit the penis for 3575 reverse riding ass shaking damage!

Us gamers amirite
Posted on 11 December 2017, 14:09 UTC by:   the13thArcana    PM
Score +14
@coffeedrug message sent yo
Posted on 11 December 2017, 15:20 UTC by:   Black Dragon King    PM
Score +9
我操他妈有圣光
Posted on 18 February 2018, 12:23 UTC by:   crossfading    PM
Score +18
Why heavily censored on doujin? Just why.

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