Posted on 27 January 2018, 00:37 UTC by: EvilOllie
Score +1
This story is amazing and I just can't wait for Part 4, 5 and many more! BUT, if you look at this page for example (/s/5e0a6cc7ad/1175651-12) there are just to many text balloons.... for my liking. Is there a way that You can divide those text balloons into 2 separate pages? Thumbs up for a fantastic performance!!
Base +1
Posted on 27 January 2018, 08:29 UTC by: E_C_Gordon
Score +5
Thanks for the comment. It’s a valid criticism. That’s something that I struggle with. I’m limited by the number of images. For instance, the page you cited is all one image. I hate seeing the exact same image in multiple pages just for dialogue. I try not to cram too many speech bubbles there, but occasionally there’s no way around it.
Base +5
Posted on 27 January 2018, 13:50 UTC by: scrimshaq
Score +7
This is much better than playing the game tbh. No grinding.
Base +7
Posted on 02 February 2018, 23:04 UTC by: Darktaka
Score +6
Keep up the good work dude love this story so far.