Noodle Cup Onahole. Let that sink in.

RAW: /g/637428/2d8a1c75ee/

Also, am I overdoing it with the edits? Let me know! I want to keep improving.

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Great job! Didn't see any problems aside from the text being off the bubble.
I was eating noodles while reading this

Also I'm going to assume that the "she is not a virgin" part is implying that they already had this relationship and fucked before The Tragedy

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I was trying to emphasize the text by going outside of the bubbles. I see the Japanese text do it sometimes, I was trying to mimic that.

Also, that's an interesting theory! After all, no one really knows how their life was before the Tragedy. Huh...

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But... Does the dick taste like noodle then ?

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