She's gonna be dead from exhaustion by the time she gets to the top of the castle. XD

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This could use a bit of proofreading.

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...and a torrent pls

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In a 3D prespective I would've been lost after facing Death in this Castle(it's like crazy stairs deep within) but I don't think I would have wanted to leave either just claim the Castle as my new home, the interior is amazing.

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If someone would be so kind as to upload a textless version of this, that'd be great. Pretty good so far, though...just needs some MAJOR proofreading, as Vilnius said.
...And @Ultima Dragon...YOU CHALLENGING ME WITH THAT NAME?

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WHAT A HORRIBLE NIGHT TO HAVE A CURSE.

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This artist needs to team up with a writer.

And for people for think this needs a proofreader: Forget it. The artist is too far into the story now. Just keep the bad grammar as a style choice and address it in the sequel/whatever comes next.

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I don't really care much for the story, but god i love the art.

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As others have already said, getting someone to proofread this is a must. Aside from that, the art style is absolutely amazing, and the story isn't too bad either. You've got a really great comic here. Fix the dialog, and this will be a masterpiece.

Base +6, allenwalker39 +6, GGS +10

other than the grammar and mispellings, I like the whole package including the sprite art, I went from NES nostalgia to SoTN, to SNES flashbacks at pg 24

Base +6, allenwalker39 +6, GGS +10

Too bad this was seemingly abandoned. It was going so well

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Was not abandoned, it's just only on patreon now and unfortunately the artist only does like three pages every four months because he has an enormously dumb commission process. This story is commissioned by someone and despite being probably their most consistent customer they still have to compete in Storm's.dumb first come first serve free for all.

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