Betina? what the fuck is betina? Does kaos know how to write?

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@Rauldelano more like who. Betina's a name man. Given how the next bit says how "she is bragging about her marriage" and all.

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@Rauldelano:
Betina means female (used for animals) in Indonesian.

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Pretty racist tbh fam

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The lineart is great however, because of the bad color job, it makes it look bad overall.
I wish they got someone to do a better coloring job.

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Ah, yes. I always hear a *pop* when my nipples get stiff. (?)

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lmfao @ the guy linking Jaguar, the dude known for tracing the majority of his art. i'm not a big fan of kaos, but at least he's not a lazy ass leech

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You can see what the problem with Kaos' take on Stormbringer's stories when you compare it with Jaguar's take the same stories, like this one /g/715100/45f58f581e/ for example. Kaos' version assumes the reader will get the entire story from just a few frames and dialog bubbles, but part of the story is missing. I'm not trying to compare Kaos' art style with Jaguar's, just how the latter decided to type a lot of the story with just one or 2 frames to illustrate instead of getting rid of the rest of the story completely.

I know it's ultimately porn and made to fap, but this needs more text to fill in the blanks. As for the whole tHaTsRaCiSt.gif part, we've gone over this so many times already, if you're not into IR porn this is definitely not for you.

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I hope this isn't 50 pages of setup for 50 pages of fucking, especially when it's updated one page at a time. We all know what's going to happen, just get to it.

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It feels like One panel of a comic at a time not a comic page at a time

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why does jamal look like a character from baki the grappler

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She knows she going to be riding the dick!!! Twist would be if his wife comes home and joins them

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idk what to say

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I wonder where this is going...

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any update? been forever

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This chapter was kind of dull.
The art is getting better at least.
"I can't have kids"
I can see where this is going.

Last edited on 10 June 2018, 05:02 UTC.

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So this is never going to get finished?

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