@akunoko: So a mom who actually wants sex is mentally retarded, despite being smart enough to manipulate her son into doing it with her? Yeah, sure. And I guess any brat who rapes his mom must be a genius. Because I bet that's probably what you wanted.

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Thank you for translating it!

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Wish they would translate Sibling's Game next

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> the fat loser wasn't pure evil

Nice surprise I guess.

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It really sucks that this site erases downvoted comments because now I can't see what Marien was responding to.

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@nowittycomment

He was saying something along the lines of "What's with this artist always drawing retarded mums".

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The cover is great but story and sex scene are a bit dull comparing to his previous work.

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Nice excuse at the end there mom, saying he's a loser who'll never find a girlfriend so she'll have to fuck him, and that the younger brother doesn't have a problem getting chicks. The real reason is that the older son has the better cock, and she just upgraded. Be honest!

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Pg 21. POMF =3

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The proofreading could have used some work (especially in the phrasing and the use of tenses).

Perhaps the most glaring and jarring example of what I'm referring to is the narration at the top-right of page six:
"I've even been said that I had left everything good about me in my mom's belly and my younger brother took them." ... ... Seriously?

Better phrasing: "It's even been said that everything good about me was left in my mom's belly and taken by my younger brother."

There are other examples too, but I won't list them all.

But considering how I've seen far worse than this, I suppose this wasn't so bad in comparison. Doesn't quite reach the level of "trashlation" thankfully.

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Iya nice to see a story where The fat loser didn't resorted to blackmail even after obtained the video of his mother had sex with his brother

on another note the mother is a slicky anda manipulated one. She keeps bad mouthing the fat kid to stripped all of his confidence so he won't be looking for another girl and can have his cock for herself

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The Mom may be manipulative and evil, but she sure knows what her priorities are. And the Sons get to get off so everybody wins.

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That's some pretty sloppy editing. Level the pages and use a paint bucket tool to clean up the next and it would look a lot better.

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The Plot Reminds me of the Baker Brothers(Doughboy and Ricky and Mrs. Baker) from Boyz In The Hood.

Except, Twisted and Taboo.

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Surprisingly wholesome.

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The mom is a manulaptive cunt and immedialty dropped the younger brother after she found the older brother has a bigger dick/stamina.

The older simply needs to hit the gym and cut his hair and hell be fine..

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