Better version already available :
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Very nice, that ripped panty hose. And then the defective swimsuit as well! Good x-ray views on p. 29, 30 and 32. Good job on getting this translated, thanks for sharing this English version.

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A for effort, but the text hurts my eyes a tiny bit

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lol DAT credit page disclaimer (rape is criminal conduct, please just do it to 2d girls)

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Nothing wrong with the text, the typesetting is quite literally the regular, basic stuff 90% of translated doujinshi out there have. Rather than the typesetting, it's the translation that could use a tiny bit of editing IMO. Overall it wasn't terrible, but a couple of lines could be reworked to flow better and the tenses of certain words needs to be changed.

Otherwise, good job. Thanks for the upload. Very nice doujin, I really liked the art. Good stuff.

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Maybe have someone who has English as their first language proofread it?

Other than that, thanks for the UL

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DILF = greasy fat old rapist otaku self insert.

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@Vulture

I don't mind proofreading this or your next project. PM me on the forums for my email

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