Translation by Jedic

Typesetting by Ironstorm (me)

Typesetters note:

I tried my hand at some basic redrawing with mixed results. In some areas I think I did alright and in other areas less so.

I may consider redrawing in the future but a more efficient and reliable method is creating text halo's and/or new text boxes.

I like the semi-transparent boxes on page 28 (usually all white with an 80.0 opacity). I'm absolutely sure I've seen it done by original artists in some CG sets somewhere.

Finally, I tried using a few more fonts in order to make the text look more lively when appropriate.

Feedback is appreciated.

>let's practice naval tit warfare!

Alright. Time to join the Navy.

Feedback: I'm not an editor, but I thought the doujin read fine. No glaring issues I saw. With the fonts, I did like how dynamic they all were. It really added to the situations, whether what they were saying was supposed to come across as stressed, erotic, loud, etc. I honestly enjoyed them. Only issue I saw was with some of them, they were hard to read. Like pg.14, bottom left. But otherwise, good stuff.

Last edited on 07 July 2018, 09:09 UTC.

Base +16, jfragrettel +8, Cmdrtimbt +6, as102 +10

Personally I always really appreciate when the contents page has the authors name translated, even if it's the simplest mspaint type setting ever. thanks for the work

Base +5, Vilnius +7, jfragrettel +8, Jago Smith +8

Never thought I'd see this translated, great work!

Base +9, jfragrettel +8

This. Is. AMAZING!
I had pretty much forgotten about this and given up hope that it would get translated.
I'm glad you picked this up and did it justice!
You did a great job here!
Between this translation and the earlier Yositama doujin of KanColle that was uploaded?
My dick is armed and ready to fire at the shipgirls(' pussies)!

Base +6, jfragrettel +8

The last two stories aside. This was amazing.

Base +5