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Translation : ZuriRaba

This is my first time translating and editing such a piece.
Any feedback, be it positive or negative, would be greatly appreciated.
Thank you.

Damn, first the insta-translation on the C94 Shuz work, now a translation of this glorious Fuurai work. Blessed week for paizuri lovers.

Thank you for the translation ZuriRaba, it is top notch.

Base +6, Deorem +6, Megaton +39, Lostalgia +8, Guardsman40k +6, Mrsuperhappy +30, veliveli +9, EscaBor +6, pleasegivemesauce +6, crudgemuffler +11

Tittyfucking clothed, nude, semi-clothed... Different clothes?! Very dang nice, pretty much everything you want from a paizuri doujin. Absolute gold.

Feedback: translation and typesetting are great! And compared to most people's first releases, it might as well be considered stellar. The whole thing looked great, hopefully you stick around and continue to translate! For the editing (other than typesetting) I'm no expert so I'll leave that to someone else, but I think you did a very good job. Thanks ZuriRaba!

Base +18, Deorem +6, Megaton +39, Lostalgia +8, Guardsman40k +6, veliveli +9, EscaBor +6, pleasegivemesauce +6, kekie-kun +6

See Takao. 5 stars.

Base +6, Lostalgia +8, Guardsman40k +6, pleasegivemesauce +6, Deorem +6, tj911 +4, crudgemuffler +11

Some guy might get overwhelmed by heaven soft paizuri.

Base +4, kekie-kun +6, Guardsman40k +6, Deorem +6, Megaton +39

I can't judge the quality of the translation but I can give you feedback on your editing. Editing and typesetting are okay for a first try. You avoided the 2 big mistakes a lot of people make (not using a comic font and use left align for the text). If you want to know more about typesetting i can recommend these tutorials http://prettyanonymo.us/index.php/scanlation-resources/anonblacks-typesetting-guide/;
http://www.insidescanlation.com/etc/The-Idiots-Guide-to-Editing-Manga/guide/main.html.

But the biggest point is: PLEASE upload every page in the original resolution (not just the cover) and don't use e-hentais downscaled 1280s for editing work.
How to download original sized RAWs from e-hentai (just in case):
1. Option if avaible you can make a torrent download.
2. Option if you have enough credits or GP you can make an archive download (use download original link)
3. Option if you don't want to use the options above or download the complete gallery you download the pictuers by using the download original link at the bottom of the page.

And you don't have to create the 1280px res pics e-hentai uses yourself. e--hentai creates them for you during the upload.

If you have more questions youn can send me a PM.

Base +10, Densuke -7, Megaton +39, Rayu +6, Guardsman40k +6, klermun +12

@zuriraba i’ve sent you a message on the e-hentai forums, I hope you consider my proposal!

Base +5

Fuurai = 10/10

Base +6, EscaBor +6, kekie-kun +6, Megaton +39, Guardsman40k +6, Deorem +6