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Musical Accompaniment https://youtu.be/iuZTk1hdpMs

And my Usual Response the the Usual Suspects upset over my translation:
https://youtu.be/C6cxNR9ML8k

Not sure what happened with p.15, that was corrected...anyway it's corrected now

For the record, I had this 95% finished two weeks ago, a couple of days after it was published, I was having trouble with about four or five lines. I had to wait for my friend Naoko to reply before I was comfortable posting it. Naoko is a Japanese citizen who speaks English, she has been a great help with these translations, helping me get over the rough spots...even SHE says that the grammar and the slang are sometimes confusing even to her...

Just when I thought I've seen every type of fetish in hentai, this appears. Is there even a word for this fetish? lol

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Well that was the weirdest thing I've tagged in a while...guess amputee will work here but sadly headless still isn't a tag.

Thanks for that musical suggestion, it made reading this all that much more entertaining.

@Thanks:
The fetish is called John K. Pe-ta
@aff587:
Thanks for the info. Maybe it'll make its way as a tag here eventually.

EDIT: Panel three of page 15 has the word "text" in red for what I assume is supposed to be some sort of SFX. Fast fix! :D

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she doesn't need to get all broken up over this

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Never ever change John K.

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@Thanks.
Amputation sex has it's devotees, generally all those galleries are flagged as "guro". They don't often make use of "magic" to detach the girls' limbs, and they don't get them back on again when they're done. THIS chapter? ...I'm not even 100% convinced it deserves that kind of tagging. It's so weird and there are no consequences after the act... Damn you JKP... You keep finding new levels of batshit crazy to spring on us! O.o

@MisterJ167
O.O ...JESUS! You mad a GIRL read this fucked-up comic and help you translate the craziness? Your balls must be inversely proportional to your common sense! ...
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Well, tell her thanks from all of us, I guess... (that and a BIIIIG "sorry!" too!)

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She REALLY needs to find someone else to investigate all these fucking after school clubs in this place.

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@Megaton: kek

@Hinoron: Yeah I wouldn't call this guro as the girl doesn't actually get dismembered... "David Blaine" tag? lol

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@Megaton @Thanks This fetish is called 'natural body magic'. It's usually shortened to nbm. It usually goes hand in hand with stage magic, hence the magic part, but because that's not always the case, the community is debating whether 'body modularity' would be better or not. You can find lots of this on Yahoo Groups, Cyber magic library or deviantart.

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>yeah, they'd pay an arm and a leg

Nice one

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the closest I've seen to this would be anything with a dullahan

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What the actual fuck

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The closest tag for this that I can think of for this is wormholes

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I glad that Akatsuki Katsuie didn follow his path.

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i have this weird boner and i think i can detach my dick...

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This is the closest I can get to fapping to guro. Well played, John K Pe-ta, well played indeed...

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In a way this is similar to Stuck in Wall right? The concept of her being unable to move anything while others have their way.

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So many questions.....

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Trafalgar Loa by John K Pe-ta.

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I pretty much love any non-guro amputation/body mod that's magical, so this is great. More magic doujins please artists!

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CUT MY LIFE INTO PIECES

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The guy who got probed by aliens is the least weird character here.

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