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"HaHa! You are captured, stupid VILLAGERS"

I'm slightly confused.

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Page 4, Panel 3 in the text bubble: "I'll ended up"
the "ended" there is kinda messing with grammar, should be "I'll end up"

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"When Japanese culture bites the tourist"

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i absolutely loved that last page, lol. It's so rare to see the raped girl actually cause some payback.

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About time there is payback for rapists.

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For once the gyaru isn't the whore. Shame she didn't get any x-ray shots though.

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God, where to start with this shit. Some of the white girl's lines can be waved off as hurr durr broken foreigner babbling while the villagers are rustic idiots, but there's just way too much crap for this to be a good translation.

Page 1, panel 1, text 1: "Dynamic" instead of "Dinamic" (seriously, how the fuck do you even make this mistake?)
Page 3, panel 1, bubble 4: "Return" instead of "Retrun"
Page 5, panel 2: "normal" instead of "a norm"
Page 7, panel 2, you really need to choose which idiom you're working with. "In olden days, blah blah" or "blah blah in the old days". "In the olden days" is just bad idiom.
Actually, page 7 in general is just a giant goddamn mess.
Page 7, panel 3, what the shit is this actually trying to say? "Travelers and politicians would buy women here"? "Politicians would travel to buy women here"? No matter which way you're looking at it, this bubble is really fucking poorly translated.
Page 7, panel 4, basic fucking plurals. "Women", not "Woman"; "on hand", not "on hands"
Page 7, panel 5: And now you're fucking up tenses, too. "Did", not "had done".
Page 8, second bubble: I am actually just going to rewrite this for you on account of how bad this English is. "That is, turning girls like you into wonderful prostitutes"
Page 10, panel 1, again with the plurals. "You make", not "You makes"
Page 11, panel 5: Rewriting for you again because if you don't get this shit by now you never will. "That's an American lass fer ya"
Page 11, panel 6: "Mixes", not "mixed"
Page 12, panel 1, bubble 4: Okay this is probably just a matter of taste, but this just calls for the past progressive tense. "This is the Japanese culture you were looking forward to", instead of what's there.
Page 15, panel 3, bubble 2: The word is "complaint". "to complain" is a verb.
Page 17, bubble 1: Fuck's sake, plurals again. "Scream", not "screams".
Page 18, panel 3, bubble 1: I'm pretty damn sure that you actually mean "aboard" instead of "abroad" here.
Page 20, panel 5, bubble 2: What the fuck is even going on here.

aaaand i just spent time reviewing all the various fuckups instead of doing anything else why

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Culturally enriched.

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The loose top was a lie. This isn't a slutty girl story! :(

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The ending is slightly confusing, but I guess it's the same girl.

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The ending is that the weeb girl gets "japanese culture" a la the Rinkan club style and then dishes out that culture to her attackers a la ninja/hentai mask style.

The real question is, What did she tell the embassy once she got back?

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I was half-expecting her father to get back at them like in that movie "Taken" at some later date, but this is fine, too.

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Loving the cultural exchange...

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HHAHAHA POOR GRAMMAR TAG

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@newtype711 shes american, all she has to say is she was raped and it was self defense and theyll give her a million bucks.

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Approved by GGG

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That ending was really unexpected, I thought it was going to end with her asking for more so it's refreshing to end up like that.

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Talk about painting your own culture with a broad brush

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I'm a bit confused over why all the men in this village are Scottish.

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I kinda wonder if she may have been undercover for the Embassy.

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@Ayelander lol they aren't scottish. japan has different dialects depending on where you go. for example the southern drawl we have in america. just depends on how the TL wants to do it.

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That ending what a twist

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@Esp007 Why would she ask for more? She's American, she knows she had easy access to huge amount of dicks with far better diversity and quality in her own country.

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AMERICA STRONG

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