So I'm not an experienced translator, I don't even read Japanese. However, considering how bad the last translation was, I have proofread and re written most of the writing while trying to stay true to the story as I understood it. If it is not up to standard, I'm happy to delete it and let a professional take care of things.

arigatou gozaimasu

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On one page she seems to like the idea of having another child, and then immediately on the next page,which is also the last, she seems to be terrified about having another child.

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Much better than the last one you have my thanks. Only one typo on page 18 stands out "In return, let me give you me semen as a reward". Aside that I could read it without anything really being off.

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In page 18 :- the sentence "In return, let me give you me semen as a reward" can be written as "In return, let me give you my semen as a reward". Obviously if you want.!!!!

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This random internet pervert thanks you for the effort you put into this.

Thank you for fixing that mess.

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Looking through the original JP texts, I'm fairly certain the this and the other english "translation" is actually a rewrite. The text is completely different. The milf never calls the dude her master.

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This guy single handily will reverse Japan's declining birthrate.

This guy single handily will reverse Japan's declining birthrate.

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@hahaha96

Yeah, it seemed really odd, however I can't read Japanese (could only find a Chinese version here, but I can't read that either so whatever) so I couldn't really figure out what the deal was.

@Kibifox

Ah crap, I'll try and fix it soon

@KazeSpirit

Entirely possible, I just tried to fix the bad English

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It has an epilogue

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Thanks for correcting the previous works' bad grammar and overall translation.

But still...

Go commit not feeling so good. /jk

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Editing is still garbage

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Only close translation to the original is the Spanish one XD

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Stuff like this just makes me realise how rarely abortion is treated as a solution.

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Still better than the first try lol.

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At first I was wondering if you could really call it a rewrite or just a terrible translation, but as it goes on, too many lines are made up for me to classify it as even a bad translation. It's not completely made up, but a lot of it is, and the stuff that isn't made up isn't very accurate.

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You forgot the other part where the milf is searching for stronger genes elsewhere implying the kids aren't even Seichi's. Probably gonna get a million kids from the whole town lol. Can't blame them though, milf is too delicious :P

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@kashkin I'm of the same opinion as you. Horrendous grammar is much worse than an inaccurate translation here and there. To get both good grammar and an accurate translation you need someone who is proficient in both languages.

Let's hope he has sons. When they grow up he can NTR them too without worrying about the implications of incest .

Last edited on 04 October 2018, 02:20 UTC.

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So how accurate is the translation here actually? The comment at RAW manga said it's not actually the child of son in law or husband. And there's some sort of an epilogue too.
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This translation is not accurate, this is a rewrite.

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