It'd be really nice to replace the handwriting with typed text. Don't get me wrong, it's a lot more legible than Mamabliss, but some of the areas where you erased what was there and rewrote it are a little difficult.

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Not bad. The finished product will likely clean up the word soup and sharpen everything else out.

Maybe a Dog girl for the next work?

The third and fourth stories are pretty nice as well. Kinda let down story 3 didn't have any incest pregnancy but the shout out to the last 2 stories plus the 2 girls was a real chuckle giver.

Last edited on 08 December 2018, 23:28 UTC.

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This looks interesting.

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Yay Color is starting to appear. I can't wait to see the whole thing colored great job foxtide888.

Last edited on 26 March 2018, 17:30 UTC.

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@rotflmao At least this isn't behind a paywall.

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Hmm. Interesting.

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Lacks color.

Edit: Take it back

Last edited on 30 June 2019, 23:15 UTC.

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he needs to do more with the giraffe milf in this one

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Can't wait to see how these pages end up. Hoping you can get to it soon.

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我tm社保，，，

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In the year 1,000,000 ½....

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