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作者大佬又开新坑了啊...

Base +5, KazeZeroL -5

very nice~

Base +6, KazeZeroL -5, swordofice1 -7, Imsolo -6, fighterzer98 -7

Sooo...does this take place before or after "Kushina Helps Hinata"? I could take it that Temari didn't know about Shika fucking Hinata before and just by coincidence after hearing Temari talk about her sex life, Hinata "wants" to fuck Shikamaru, albeit, it being "again" since Temari isn't aware.

Base +10, KazeZeroL -5, swordofice1 -7, fighterzer98 +7

Hi, Please make one with Boruto X HInata

Base +6, gen.gwl -8, Getsugan -4, dogbertcarroll +12, swordofice1 +7, KazeZeroL -5, Kinkiepie -6, windwolf777 -6, GGS +10

I know this is hentai, but they are way too matter-of-fact about this.

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Draws fantastically sexy women...
Men are tiny cocked and look derpy as fuck.
Has boring and wasteful kinks...

Yeah, so much potential here.

Base +7, Lacunae +6, Imsolo +6, fighterzer98 +7, Void161 -2

I think that you'll get more mileage with,"This is the perverted (or erotic) version of my technique!"

Base +14, GGS +10, fighterzer98 +7, starburst98 +6, Void161 +2

I don't know, man, Naruto has his shadow clones.

Base +6, GGS +10, Lacunae +6, fighterzer98 +7, Addictorator +10

the main issue is there is a lack of mini story most hentai doujin based on popular series tend to make to give context but while this has potential It always feels like Felsala is...I don't know it just feels like it's missing something. like compared to others the sex scenes just feel like they're there but...no substance I guess is one way to describe it.

Base +6, Addictorator +10

¡Hola! No he visto ningún problema grave en esta traducción salvo en la página 8, donde dejaste un "más" sin traducir y quizás también algún problema de puntuación (falta de alguna coma o de puntos al final de las frases).

P.D: Me encanta este comic. Me encantaría follar a esas tres chicas por el culo. Pero como petición, si puede ser, me gustaría que en las siguientes páginas ellas empezaran a besarse mutuamente.

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