This translation is a rough draft made by someone bad at using Photoshop.
Feel free to use the script if you want to make a better version.

The line on page 14 is actually "Because right now, I'm not a Ruler! So my defense has dropped!". But I saw an opportunity, and I took it.

Original gallery: /g/1337955/3a79f3ea3b/

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I don't know why but Gudao seems to look a lot like Kotomine for some reason.
The expressions also helps my point too, lol.

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HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU TOO

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Funny how everyone kind of agreed that vanilla Jeanne is the lewd one while Alter is the pure one.

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Tbh i was kinda expecting the censoring to be All complete full on white due to the comment Gudao made
atleast way more white

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Still lacking Ruler Jeanne.

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OMG you translated it so fast for real! Thank you!

So...Chad Gudao is even more Chad when translated.
Also that pun at page 14, lol.

Rated 👌/10

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wtf is this Chad Gudao lmao. It actually made me like him. For that alone I gotta give it a solid 10/10

Last edited on 05 January 2019, 01:34 UTC.

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Prefer more sweet vanilla lovey dovey shit, but muh fucking dick is hurt.

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>dynamic

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*see Gudao* Kotomine, what have we said about murdering children and taking on their identities to fuck female Servants?

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gudao reminds me of that producer guy from zombieland saga

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The CHAD gudao

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Can you please redo the translation of part 2 of scathach doujin by the same artist which has been tainted by Laruffi?

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this art style is amazing, looks almost official

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