Neon Genesis Evangelion Doujin

http://doujinshi.mugimugi.org/book/13586/RE-TAKE-~After~/
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Base +27, hwiki +8, MT666888 +18, eyelezz +8, dajie +16, Coma +17, tyytyyt1 +4, shadows_kami +6, mustardpie +20, mightymouse +10, aloc1234 +26, Buraku-chan +10, surted -14, and 5 more...

Last one or there is a final after this "after"?

Base +14, MT666888 +18, eyelezz +8, Soplon +11, dajie +16, tyytyyt1 +4, shadows_kami +6, mightymouse -10, Seiryuu Blade -9, NGRTRN +4, surted -14, jfragrettel +5, chunni102 +5

This is one of my favorites.

Base +3, MT666888 +18, eyelezz +8, dajie +16, tyytyyt1 +4, BeloBr +9, shadows_kami +6, mightymouse +10, Slobber -29, Evil Scorpio +23, surted -14, jfragrettel +5, Forsaekn139 +5

Like the art style and of course the ecchi non hentai works of this author.

Base +12, MT666888 +18, eyelezz +8, dajie +16, tyytyyt1 +4, mustardpie -20, mightymouse +10, Evil Scorpio +23, surted -14, jfragrettel +5, MarcusSorel +4

This series is so good that it made the anime second-rate.
One of the best doujin I've ever read.

Base +5, mightymouse +10, Slobber +29, Annon +10, iwillrememberdistime +5, jinko900 +3, hel1234567890 +4, NGRTRN +4, Evil Scorpio +23, m42a +17, angrybull +9, surted -14, Nonamewalker +6, and 11 more...

Huh, so this is where the Germany is the worst country in the world meme came from.

I'm really surprised that it's the actual dialogue. I'd always thought it was an edit.

Base +7, Slobber +29, Kiryu4K +7, surted -14, jfragrettel +5, MarcusSorel +4, mchhhhh -4, nothanksgranddad +6

This plot puts the actual NGE series to shame.

Base +8, Slobber +29, iwillrememberdistime +5, NGRTRN +4, Evil Scorpio +23, angrybull +9, surted -14, Nonamewalker +6, jfragrettel +5, Obsucurus +8, jismen7 +7, Forsaekn139 +5, sergiorr90 +6, and 6 more...

This is a masterpiece among your normal doujinshi.

Base +7, iwillrememberdistime +5, Evil Scorpio +23, surted -14, jfragrettel +5, jismen7 +7, sergiorr90 +6, MarcusSorel +4

This was a truly refreshing take on the characters of eva, and my only gripe is that those from the source material will never receive this sort of ending (atleast from what ive seen). I wish there were more doujinshi with this level of quality, I really do.

Base +3, starburst98 +9, Seiryuu Blade +10, iwillrememberdistime +5, Evil Scorpio +23, surted -14, Owen_Self +4, jfragrettel +5, jismen7 +7, Forsaekn139 +5, sergiorr90 +6, MarcusSorel +4, nothanksgranddad +6

Pure....awesomeness. Nothing else need be said

Base +4, iwillrememberdistime +5, Evil Scorpio +23, surted -14, tompeng +7, jfragrettel +5, MarcusSorel +4

Probably one of the best series on this site. Too bad number 4 isn't here. Wish it were.

This probably doesn't need to be a hentai (given most of the story is more on the plot than the sex itself).

I honestly prefer this story over the original and that's saying something.

I love the character's action that the author did. Shinji isn't quite the annoying little whiny bitch as he later on begins to accept and learn to fix his mistakes.

I also am a fan of ShinjixAsuka so that's also a plus.

I love the little girl who actually Asuka's daughter. She puts the thinking onto a whole new level, especially when talking with the original Asuka from the original world which Shinji destroyed to rewrite a new but similar world.

I love the fact that they include the original Asuka trying to intertwine with Shingi and the other Asuka, trying to ruin them since she died in the original world and knows that the world's history will repeat itself, but Shinji by now has already learned to accept it and apologizes to the original Asuka, which in turn, when the original Asuka finally decides to move on, she begins to realize how much she did love Shinji and Shinji's "dream" could of been nothing more but the original Asuka's desire to be married to him, has his child, and live a happy life but again, just speculation.

Base +4, Gilgamesch +6, MoonShine +7, Evil Scorpio +23, surted -14, Owen_Self +4, Tagapilay +5, For Washuu +7, MarcusSorel +4

I can't remember if I read after? I had to have. Guess it is time to read again.

Base +6, jfragrettel +5

Roads reeking of mold, the whole country stinks of alcohol and the trash isn't collected in time? Since when is Asuka french?

Base +6, Lapbunny +6, jfragrettel +5, Xcelcio +6, MarcusSorel +4, 96Kshatriya +6

best NGE doujin ever

Base +6, MarcusSorel +4

And so, the story had come to an end...

Base +9, MarcusSorel +4

This is one of my favorite stories of all time. I honestly can't put into words how much I love this series, it's quite possibly my favorite of any story I've read. It was just so well put together it amazes me.

I absolutely hate endings, and if I were to write a story I wouldn't end it, not would I leave it at a cliffhanger, I'd rather cancel it and leave the story open to the future, whether or not it will be continued. This, though... This is an ending I personally love. I'm very glad this ended the way it did and I'm left empty, as usual, but also content. Happy, even. If this were to be continued I'd welcome it with open arms, but if not I'm fine with that too.

This goes beyond doujins, beyond manga, and beyond books, if not on the same level as them. Typing alone can't help to express how much I love and enjoy this. Not loved and enjoyed, like I would say with books though. That implies that at some point I stopped loving and enjoying it, and with this that certainly is not the case

Base +6, PlsNo:( +4, febreezeforce +5, MarcusSorel +4

Its nice to take a trip down memory lane, reading this after 10 years is really an eye opening experience,

Base +6, MarcusSorel +4, poop24 +6, nothanksgranddad +6, ltwysw321 +4

Page 55 and your legs

Base +6

tewst on osoiedg

Base +9

whow dig 14

Base +6

Somewhat confusing ending I guess but it wouldn't be Evangelion if it wasn't a bit confusing, now would it?

Base +2

I miss old NGE doujins. Pure gold, I say.

Base +7, nothanksgranddad +6

hgchjjhhhgffhnbcff

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the good stuff

Base +6

Test yoooooo

Base +4

i gotta do a re-read of this, i don't remember this at all. like, last i remember of retake was they found a bunker, lived their lives there and i think time goes back and asuka says some german things to shinji as a love declaration.

edit: oh wait, this is it, i just completely forgot about everything.. oof.

Base +11

This is what we read doujinshi for: stories that can truly add to the original, and sometimes conclude it better than the original author could. I am so very glad to have found this story.

Base +6

actually pretty good

Base +8

Shinji goes back in time and tries to fix the future might seriously become the plot for the final theatrical edition.

Base +6, Codjumper +6

WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

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Is any among you afflicted? let himpray. Is any merry? let him sing psalms.

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