Hi! I'm Kirby! This is the first doujin I have ever translated! :D
It's a little rough, as I'm not at all fluent in Japanese, in fact I'm a new learner!
I used a lot of google translate for this, I'm sorry >.<
I particularly had trouble with page 24.
I couldn't for the life of me figure out what Haru was saying! Forgive me!

Criticism is welcome!

Good on you for making a genuine effort but yes it’s obvious that you used google translate and a lot of guesswork. Is English your first language?

I suggest you learn/practice more before attempting to translate. Machine translation is kinda frowned upon here. Also BL isn’t exactly a popular genre here so you’re probably better off seeking feedback in a more supportive community elsewhere.

That said, you can pm me if you want to know what pg24 says.

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@magickinoko hi there! yes i see that BL isn't a popular genre from the ratings haha.
English is my first language, but I do have some mental problems that really make it hard for me to understand some things, i'm afraid ahaha.
But thank you for the response! I will practice a lot more and make even better things!

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