This is my first localisation.

I think I have messed up a few of the more complex sentences but the English at least should be fine.

Any feedback is appreciated.

Edit:

I have translated the moans and improved the type setting.

There is too much white space in bubbles. You have to increase the font size.

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It's not a bad first translation. It's understandable and largely works, but the text is way too small to be aesthetically pleasing, which can turn some people away. The unstranslated parts also seem to make some portions of the manga seem incomplete.

Still not a bad attempt. My advice would be just to keep trying and you'll be better as time goes on. Although most of your time would be on the editing and the translations it seems.

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Here are 2 links to typesetting tutorials:
http://prettyanonymo.us/index.php/scanlation-resources/anonblacks-typesetting-guide/
https://www.insidescanlation.com/etc/the-idiots-guide-to-editing-manga/guide/main

If you need more visit the "Cove of Scanlators" on the forums.

Edit:
If you translate Hakaba you should realy translate the moans. I know it's a pain in the ass to edit them, but for Hakaba their kind of essential (just my opinion).

Edit 2:
Looks better now. Thanks. Now you can call it a solid first try.
Would have a shame to leave it like before, because a translated Hakabe work has become a rare treat.

Last edited on 08 February 2019, 20:37 UTC.

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Ancient-Alien thanks for the advice.

I've read through the typesetting guide you sent me. I'll translate the moans and fix up the typesetting over the next couple of days

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@molitar

Dude, chill. It's just cartoon porn. As long as you can separate fantasy from reality it's fine. Besides, you'd be surprised how many people actually enjoy being treated like this for real. Fetlife and the bdsm community as a whole doesn't exist for no reason y'know. Not saying it's the norm or that all women like to be treated like this, in fact it's probably the minority, but it's really not as "sick" as you think it is. I mean, the women who want to be treated like this, do you think they are "sick" as well? It's not your cup of tea and that's fine, but seriously, where do you think you are. It's a bit of an unspoken rule not to kink shame, and not just on this site either.

tl;dr: RELAX. And unclench your anus before you develop hemorrhoids or something. It's just a dumb wank fantasy. Nothing more.

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I see hakaba is the man of cultural as well. lol, reincarnated in different world.

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RAW:/s/bd5f9957e8/1341356-176

汉化希望

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So,was it all a fantasy?

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Happy end for the president, although every time she switches there's the possibility of being discovered.

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This is pretty damn tame, considering she doesn't get found out and trapped in the role.

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Next level Isekai bait

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will there be a sequel?

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@anthrofan I hope so. You have no idea how badly I hope so.

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