This is my first honey select attempt, I am submitting it here f

that jst pure crap

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giantess losing to goblins lol whats the point

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臥槽 奸屍 不是应该玩活的吗→_→

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A 4/4 with flying means nothing if you are attacking a bunch of 1/1's.

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Not a guro fan but some good angles here.

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"giantess losing to goblins lol whats the point"

You bring a valid point. I'll make the fight last longer next time with more challenge.

Thanks :)

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Ongoing? Why?

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Not bad for a first try. While I understand how long it takes to pose and render - maybe make the fight (or at the least the time to kill) a bit longer. While I'm rather not a huge fan of text in CG images - maybe at least have an intro image that explains what exactly is going on - context never hurt anyone. Overall - keep up of the good work - look forward to seeing more!

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"Not bad for a first try. While I understand how long it takes to pose and render - maybe make the fight (or at the least the time to kill) a bit longer. While I'm rather not a huge fan of text in CG images - maybe at least have an intro image that explains what exactly is going on - context never hurt anyone. Overall - keep up of the good work - look forward to seeing more!"

I'll be sure to add text in another series!

Thanks for the suggestion and thank you for the compliment.

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Good job on this first entry. A few things to suggest - two things combined would really help the clarity of your work.

First, take more time to show incremental movement when the motion. A good example is when the goblin throws the rock onto the angel. You show him with the rock ready to throw, then it suddenly shifts to the impact of the rock. One more image of him releasing the rock or the rock in transit would help the flow. There are several more examples before the rock throwing but it was the most obvious example.

Second, the camera angles can be worked on. A lot of the focus in the fight is on the actions of the goblins. Focus on making them recognizable, there are several shots showing the goblins from odd angles or only pieces of them. This would work if the shots were more incremental so you can see the goblin figures emerge, but the way they are now it's hard to tell which parts of the goblins you're looking at. Better angles to show clearly the form of the goblins would help the shots stay grounded.

And a third thing to work on in general is lighting. But this is a never ending lesson. Everyone can always work on lighting, but it can make the world of difference. Practice your three-point lighting and transitioning lighting from shot to shot.

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Noted. This is the first time I've heard of three point lighting system. I'll be doing some reading on that.

And yeah, the transitions aren't the smoothest, I'll have to work on that for sure.

Thanks again.

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Would really like to see more things like this online... there's not many out there right now and it is in demand, only seen one or two similar to anything like this but it's an awesome line to go down,
personally i though a 30ft giant angel would've at least put up more of a fight and been significantly stronger than this... she just seems like a helpless damsel like every female in something like this.
personally would like to have seen more but that's just me.
but hope more things like this arrive soon. and involving more mythical creatures

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U HAVE TO DO MORE OF THAT!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i give a shit on wrong light. the mindset is the best i ever saw! love that! when do u think comes the update?

ur fan

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A real good and very impressive work imho! Its rare to see some storys like this kind today. And now you got a new fan.

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waiting for Angels vs Goblins 2 :)

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welp, I JUST DISCOVERED SOMETHING I DIDNT KNOW I NEED

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"waiting for Angels vs Goblins 2 :)"

Thank you, I have a redemption plot in my mind. One with more action focused scenes.

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Very brutal, lots of potential here for fallen heroine in the future... Is it concluded now? Seems so, unless you intend to animate it down to bones, which seems like it would take dozens if not hundreds of slides, I would b more interested in seeing what you do with the sequel!

My input for the series should you be interested:

* The art was very good, the character design too, but some things that would be more appealing imo:
- the facial expressions are what could use the most improvement, from the heroine's initial war face rage, to her first moment of fear, to realizing she is defeated, to then realizing the terrible things that means for her at the mercy of the goblins, to shock at seeing what is happening to her,, to her dazed face while the worst things happen, to her last breath, to her expired face... All of those expressions could be much more carefully done, and much more animated / expressive.
- it seems like page 145 where she slumps to the ground is where she dies or blacks out, but the facial expression from 151-209 almost seems like maybe the heroine is dazed and fading the whole time, you could use this phase a lot more to show maybe there is still a chance, until that brutal end... She is a higher lifeform, so maybe the injuries were not mortal or she regenerates, or has potential tp regenerate at least... That would make it more interesting.
- Less practical armor, or losing armor progressively during the fight, and showing concern on her face and attempting to cover herself as she fights would be hot. Maybe starting in full but close fitting armor that breaks away during the battle until she is barely covered, and then when she is dazed and defeated everything that remains being cut away until she is naked

* The wings being cut off was effectively brutal, more attention there next time maybe, maybe make that were she realizes she is not immortal and starts considering worst case scenarios... Real fear creeps in. Maybe do something with the wings and limbs (if you go the amputee route), trophies on wall or something she watches as they are hung up, with very noticeable empty spaces on the wall for the rest of her...

* more blowjobs and sex before any coup de grace

* I strongly think instead of death, maybe the angel becomes a ghost, watches in horror at is done to her beautiful vessel, and goes to find a new body to inhabit, or is born again magically so she can seek revenge... Only to fail again. each sequel maybe becoming more mind broken, and lust filled, losing a different way each time, or even bringing friends with her and being defeated together. Or maybe a living head in a jar, watching what happens and then put on a shelf with others, until brought back some other more sinister way.

* Some other tags that might be worth considering building into your art:
-Vore
-Mind Break
-Amputee
-Body Modification
-Absorption
-Forniphilia
-Petrification
-Onahole
-All the way through
-Shrinking

Anyway, great start. Hope you release more soon!

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AthenaIV , great response, and great ideas.
At 151, the expression comes from getting her ear raped and damage to her brain. At this point, I treated her as effectively dead.
But you are right, I am definitely not 100% satisified with her expressions, and I do think she should've reacted more to her loss of her wings.

My current idea for a sequel (spoiler!):

Her sister slaughters every one of the goblins and takes the head off of the wall where it will be mounted and sends her down to hell by her sibling for disgracing herself and the angels by dying to the goblins. There, she is forced to fight and die, over and over again until she can prove her competence.

Meanwhile, perhaps her sibling can meet her mortality by perhaps taking on way too many goblins at once? :)

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dear g2320:
I love ur art like it is! and i know, that im not alone with that. so try to do URS and not the shit of other more experienced artists. u are the best right now, that was a masterpiece and i hope there is comin an equal story soon.
that category is very rare, and after a time the artist are goin in the Vore section. that disappoints me, because i hate vore :D (boring and unreal)

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To Darkdevil1131

I am currently working on a side project unrelated to this one and will likely start the sequel after its completion. Thanks for your enthusiasm though!

May I ask what exactly is the category you are seeking? :P

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i don t know accactly, but somethin with gynophagia, but the hunt is very important. so, i guess an angel is not an easy target... maybe a girl who is in a fight, can flee. the reader thinks, she is secure but the hunter is better and get her. after that he dissects her

very bad ideas, buut im not an artist ;)
waintin for ur site, hope its rdy soon

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I actually do have another gynophagia project going, near its conclusion too actually. I'll post it.

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