Posted on 23 February 2019, 22:16 UTC by: Hamjameter
Score +5
@yomannn2 It should be "dimwitted" or "slow-witted" rather than "dumb witted" in the title. I'm a native English speaker.
Overall, I really liked the story and how it unfolded, and I loved the art style for the sister. But I feel this could have been so much better with a less hideous dude and without the unwashed dick and smegma-eating part. I'll never understand the whole チンカス fetish some authors like to put into their stories. I think that's naaasty. She was literally gagging from the stench of his unwashed dong at the bottom-right panel of page 27 (ごほ=cough, for those who don't know). lol
Yes, the guy had a cold, but the last time I caught a bad cold that lasted for nearly a week (this happened around 7 or 8 years ago), I still mustered the strength to shower almost daily, in between all the sleeping and nose-blowing.
Even without making the guy better-looking, this story would have been 2 or 3 times more enjoyable if the sister had taken the brother into the bathroom to shave and bathe him right after page 21 (the titty-sucking portion), and then the story would pick up at 22 after the dude got cleaned up. Net result = immediate plot improvement.
Last edited on 24 February 2019, 07:06 UTC.
Base +6, Ark_Thompson -11, jessica702 +10, magness -6, megaz98 +6
May i ask how do you ripped out a encrypted pdf file. I bought flower symbolism from same author but the problem is it was secured and cannot be export as images.
@kilabotngcr I went to developer tools while viewing the gallery online, found the images under the sources tab, and downloaded each one manually. Unfortunately I haven't found a more efficient way to do it.