Our comments: I found this by pure coincidence when looking up possible Christmas-related doujinshi. I decided to work on this for Christmas, but our holidays were swamped so we were unable to release this on-time. Regardless, we enjoyed it!
Note: Sorry for the delay. I was busy with midterms, but I finally uploaded the v2 with the corrections. Thanks to Yuki Makoto for pointing out those mistakes.
Posted on 06 March 2019, 11:07 UTC by: LoliViolator
Score +7
Thank you for your hard work! Udon's ncmk are always cute
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Posted on 06 March 2019, 23:55 UTC by: Yuki Makoto
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There's an error on page 4. Maki isn't saying that NIco waited in the snow, she's saying she waited for Nico in the snow
@GungnirHeart Happy to be of help.
Last edited on 08 March 2019, 17:14 UTC.
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Posted on 07 March 2019, 04:25 UTC by: GungnirHeart
Score +6
@Yuki Makoto I see the mistake now. I had assumed that this was about Nico wandering off and thinking to herself. The kind of loneliness she experienced before she met u's and became an idol. So I misinterpreted it as such and that Nico was just waiting in the snow until Maki came along.
I'll fix the mistake and let my TS know! Thank you very much for the spot! It's much appreciated.