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Would be nice if you came up with scenarios that aren't 'wildly unbelievable'.

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Yeah, that organisation doesn't even have that many members and they usually work in pairs.

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This guy is just rapidly becoming worse, storywise and artwise.
I mean even that comic with the Naruto and Hinata swinging had some logic to it as flawed as it was, at least up till the part where sasuke came out of nowhere and raped Hinata for no reason that was utterly disconnected to the rest.
But this? It's just stupid from the get-go, I mean really Hinata is braindead enough that she'll think asking a terrorist cult of psychopaths to stop is a good idea?
I swear its like a 14 year old's first fanfic.

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Seriously, how hard is it to make a porn story that doesn’t make ones head implode from the stupidity?

It’s not even so much about the cheating- you could easily have Hinata feel neglected and do a simple cheating story from that and not have the reader bash their head against a wall from the stupidity.

And yes, I know, it’s porn, whatever- it’s still hard to jack off to something this stupid

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Three biggest criticisms for this artist:
1. Improve story telling
2. Look up Doxy's guides to drawing porn, you need to understand structure and weight of the body.
3. Stop with all the cucky things. Yea some people draw interracial, some draw traps, some draw NTR, but when you just grab up every cucky thing, it just seems like you are a complete degenerate or an egelord.

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Now that I've thought about it, how hard is it to come up with an porn story?

It shouldn't be that hard to go with something different, like prostitution or an impregnation wish.

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^^ Hahaha, nobody should ever take advice from Doxy.

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Here we go again, let see what cringe is this.

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If we don't get an Six Paths of Pain reference, I'm calling this an hack.

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Saw the cover image

Was hoping for Konan on Hinata Femdom Yuri

Dissapointed

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Friend I love the work you do with naruto hentais.
Could you make konan have a pierced nipples?
if possible, make one of kushina being a whore please.

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Even though I love this two chicks,
The Personality in this story doesn't fit shit

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