Mmmm ^^ camping is dangerous in fact.
I'm really waiting for more.

Base +6, kitsuneyoukai -6, xtrullor666valve +5, Elisa93 +6, ZhetIlluma -7, Puppyfluff +3, Elf_Sponge +7, Keldy5 +6

Not a fan of vore but this story actually has some reality to it, the characters actually tried to resist and it wasn't a 100% grantee that they did not have any chance... Until the devourer "conveniently" regurgitates the one with the phone and then "accidentally" crushes the phone.

Oh wait 100% guarantee they did not have a chance, because deus ex machina....

Came close... Close enough I'm not going to down vote it for no originality as it had hints it could have been a good story.
Maybe if the devourer saw the phone and knew what it was and crushed it for that reason, I could buy that.

And would it kill to have a vore story without the distended belly's as the devourer eats only one at a time instead of stupid infinite expansion? Please?
You could have made the first character and the second character be eaten hours apart and digested with no trace and the targeted party would have still had no idea of the danger if handled right.

Edit: Page 11, an attempt to bring the story back? We will see.

Last edited on 03 April 2019, 23:20 UTC.

Base +6, Amagi2 -6, anonann8 +9, Puppyfluff +3

I hope another comes along anf eats this dragon

Base +9, eastxx +6, kitsuneyoukai +6, ZhetIlluma -7, Puppyfluff +3

What is with the low rating? The art in good and the story is average for the genre.

Base +10, ZhetIlluma -7, TheOneWhoSees +6, Seelenmord -11, jordan ap +6, Puppyfluff +3, fndmash +10, Old Sparky +6, Keldy5 +6

sins ther are littlerey giant track of a huge draon and also phone exist in this univers ! well matter of time before he getting caught and kild off ! well phones ! cars ! so why not also guns ! a draon being eaten by the little guys later on will be a awsom comback revenge !

Base +4, Amagi2 -6, Puppyfluff -3, xtrullor666valve -6

Funny not a single one thought to give the dragon a major belly ache by clawing at his insides. Your in his gut surely if you move around enough you can cause him enough discomfort to make him think swallowing you was a bad idea.

Base +8, Amagi2 -6, Puppyfluff -3, xtrullor666valve -6

Darlumina you are right.
You would think one of these campers would have a pocket knife...
I personally carry three, Swiss army, Buck and a fold out box cutter razor.
I also carry a GP-100 357 MAG but that's besides the point.

Base +6, Amagi2 -6, Puppyfluff -3, xtrullor666valve -6