My first attempt at translating something ...
hope it's alright .

A lot of people are going to get upset because of the quality of the typesetting, but the translation is quite readable, thank you. Knowing the guy deserved it makes it better by far for me, a lot of Sugar Milk's victims are innocent and that leaves a bad taste in my mouth.

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I agree, thanks for the translation, karlus113.

People given a translation for free: "This typesetting is UNREADABLE!"

Is it more unreadable than the Japanese version is for you? '__'

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its a good attempt and still readable. theres alot stuff can be improved keep on learning and u will be better.

please keep it up~ cheers

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Because someone who doesn't even take the time to look at even basic typesetting guides that are easily accessible to anyone obviously deserves all the leeway in the world. <_<

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Not bad for a first time. For future reference, a good font you can use is CC Wild Words, it fits well with most manga and is fairly readable (it also helps to use center formatting instead of right or left with manga speech bubbles). You can obviously use other fonts, but that's a generally good basic one for starting out before you start getting the hang of typesetting.

Key is the font can't be too busy, but it also can't be too dull. You have to find a middle ground where it's readable and also doesn't distract from the images on the page.

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I fucking adore Sugar Milk. Just something about his/her art style and the femdom as a whole.. My face lights up whenever I see his/her tag on a girls forM release (same with Kokuryuugan/Magaroku). Some of the best femdom out there, without a doubt. Many thanks, chief.

My favorite is still that one with the dominant courtesan. That scene where the boy is eating her pussy and she's just chilling on the window ledge with her pipe like it's matter-of-fact. Soooo hot.

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For a first attempt its good. I guess you stuck very close to the original text, with practice you get the hang of taking some liberties to improve the flow of the text and maybe even adjust the sequence of some speech-bubbles to make it work with English grammar and sentence structure. I have even seen some translator add an additional bubble if they needed it because the text would become too small.

For typesetting. Make a new custom text tool, and make center text or block format the default so you dont have to click it every time. As long as you keep the text in the center of the bubble its enough. Dont try to fill the bubble with text, if you keep varying font size all the time it looks strange and can give the impression that the people are talking with varying volumes.
Also in the last two bubbles where its "Kei-chan!" you can add a bit more text, like "hello!" "hey!" or such things that a english speaker would say when trying to get to someone on the phone.

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Typesetting quite obviously ain't great, but getting decently translated Girls forM hardcore femdom is a win in my book.

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Two pointers.

1. Comic Sans is considered a cardinal sin with this sort of stuff. Look up fonts like Anime Ace and use that instead.
2. If you are using programs like Photoshop or Gimp, put your text in center alignment.

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Thanks for the advices you guys !! I really appreciate it !!

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I have been waiting for this to be translated since forever

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Please translate more Girls forM stuff. you know just for training purpose of course...

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If you download your pages for editing individually, please use the "Download Original" link at the bottom of the pages. You should only use "click right and save" if there is no "Download Original" link.
e-hentai's downscaled 1280px are for viewing not for edting. The image quality and resolution of these images are lower compared to the larger originals. Even if the resolution is the same, you should always use the "Download Original" link if you're downloading for editing.

Typesetting guide: https://www.insidescanlation.com/etc/the-idiots-guide-to-editing-manga/guide/main , or go to the "Cove of Scanlators" on the forums or use google.

Searching for free fonts check dafont.com or google free fonts for more sites with free fonts.

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RAW: /s/46475eca1a/758689-270
RAW: /s/7e178d910a/761876-279
ENG: /g/1418400/0a55cd4ff0/ (you are here)
ENG: /g/1430674/075b3a099d/
CHN: /g/919862/74837cfe18/
ITA: /g/1116582/fa66bea9bf/
ESP: /g/1146580/1b8c1a0e3a/
FRA: /g/1155114/dd72760d5f/

Last edited on 14 June 2019, 02:11 UTC.

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There is no space before punctuation in English. Periods, commas, exclamation points, etc.
This is very irritating for the reader.

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@onlyregistere Maybe the translation is "readable" but it's not entirely accurate...
For example, on page 3, this TL says: "Awake at last , we aren't in the store <3" "wait, you druged me and cuffed me, why ?" "Don't get me wrong . This outfit has nothing to do with my job ."
The actual TL should be: "You're awake? This is my shop <3" "What? So you were soliciting me. You lied!" "It's free. I'm not working now..."
Those are the only 3 bubbles I casually compared, I have no idea about the rest.

It's true that this great Sugar Milk chapter had been forgotten for years before someone paid attention to it, though. I appreciate the good intentions. And yeah, on the typesetting side, I see a lot of people are giving you good advice.

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@sangaz Which is dominant courtesan? Link please?

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what a beautiful duwang

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i didnt really notice "the bad typesetting " until someone pointed it out, I think its 20x better than CGrascal,

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Looks like a MTL.

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Please do more, idc about low quality, just new decent content is appreciated a lot.

So many very good girls form doujins were left untranslated.

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Sugar Milk is a god. Thanks for translating, hope to see more from this guy and Girls forM in general. I appreciate how you're enthusiastic about the feedback too.

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"All is good? how is to hole?"

I can't ... I just keep bursting out laughing.

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If you're suffering from depression, the book 'Feeling Good' by MD David Burns can help.
It's about cognitive-behavioral therapy, a successful treatment for depression.
Link to PDF:
https://www.sendspace.com/file/p4j962

You can also try some St. John's Wort (it's a plant) tea for immediate relief (I mix mine with Melissa for the calming effect).

It might also be nice to learn to meditate, as it can relieve your mind of negative thoughts. nperov.com for learning materials.

Or maybe you just have a vitamin D defficiency, see https://warosu.org/sci/thread/S10221251

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Thank you.

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