Just a really rough comic about Sona from League Of Legends.

The quality isn't very good, but I had a lot of fun drawing it, I also plan to use this as a comparison piece for myself as i continue to draw more in the future.

If you have any typesetting advice, structure advice, or paneling advice feel free to tell me about it!

Hope ya'll enjoyed it!

EDIT: Forgot to mention.

https://twitter.com/TrencherMariana

https://www.pixiv.net/member.php?id=8777702

where i post the non comic stuff

@Koren22 Keep it up, looking forward to more. :)

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Good work. Use less words. It is maybe as twice as long as it is should be.

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You might also try experimenting with more fluid paneling. Having some of the foreground art overstretch the lines of the panels and giving the panels softer lines will help the comic flow more; you can also use line, background art, and posing to direct the readers’ eyes from panel to panel in the intended order.

If you want to look more into paneling and how it can affect the flow of graphic storytelling, I’d suggest looking up some artists’ dissections of Akira Toryama’s mangas. The man can’t keep his plotlines straight or write complex and nuanced characters, but he’s a master of visual storytelling.

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Would be nice to see Sona's tits and face slapped hard

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the only problem is that you stopped just when it got to the best part.

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