Translated and edited by: darknight

Completely re-edited, and with a new bonus epilogue. Will add the final chapter of the omake if it ever comes out.

Thanks for translation !!

RAW : /g/1428482/ce9920c214/

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Darknight, someone was working on a decensored version based upon your translation. Their last update said they were still ongoing with the translation at:
/g/1286567/0d5e22177e/

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Epilogue: *gets translated*

MRW: https://youtu.be/aJ0LYQ21oIM?t=82

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@ pg 194
*Record scratch*

*Freeze frame*

Yup, that's me. You're probably wondering how I ended up on a huge orc cock.

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Thank you darknight!

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Holy mother of tags!

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The power of a name really is amazing. She was the orc's the moment he gave her the name "Erona".
He used her trauma to psychologically set up a separate personality in her, and the name let it have a place in her mind despite her never realizing it. Essentially, Geldorix planted a seed in her mind, and the name he gave it let it grow. When her despair was at its greatest, he manipulated her into letting "Erona" take over.
All the same, he used that sexual trauma (under hypnosis) to make it so she'd eventually crave him and his cock whether she was under hypnosis or not. He conquered her body, then used her despair/trauma to conquer her mind, after which he used the seal on her soul to complete it. A classic strategy that's pretty commonly used in a lot of mind control doujins, but this one does it quite well.
Another thing of note I noticed, Alex likely wouldn't have given up on Claudia if he hadn't burned out his soul. The combination of his stress due to his sickness, with the contents of the letter she sent him, was enough to make him livid and completely give up on her. If he had the state of mind to think about WHY she ran away despite what he did for her, he would have possibly been able to figure it out. Instead, he gave up and gave into his despair.
The orc wasn't just intelligent with magic, he was a master of psychological manipulation and torture. That's why I love this story, because the orc knew what he was doing and author fleshed him out to his greatest logical potential. That's the kind of quality you want to see in mind control stories, lewd or not.

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BAD END is BEST END <3

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Quite a story there, damn, good job author. Though i have to say, the orc's plans "could've" been stopped then and there if the guy realized Claudia was beyond saving, wounds can be healed, but scars lasts forever and Claudia has a freakin' huge scar, but instead stuck on to false hope of sealing those "scars" which ultimately led to their downfall. Story reminds me of mil's work: Himekishi Tame.

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I will repeat it again, true love won in the end...

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It's a shame that the author did not color the last page with Claudia and her empress costume
but I will be eternally grateful for having heard me and doing a little more of his work

Last edited on 24 June 2019, 08:10 UTC.

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YOU FUCKING WHORE!!



For the ages - Alex

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So, my question doesn't have much to do with this doujinshi, but I was wondering.... What is the cruelest and meanest story of netorare that you guys had read ?

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@dekir The Ragnarok online doujins with the knight is def up there, Love mary isn't really mean but it's very good. Welcome to the dark side is the first doujin where I go 'whew too much'

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I dont usually like the ntr orc rape stuff because its usually all the same drivel I seen before. But this one actually had a fleshed out story, with characters and everything. Honestly a good read, this coming from a pure vanilla fag. If these orc stories were usually like this I would read them more often.

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Always nice to see an all time classic in improved quality. Thanks darknight!

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ERONA Orc Page 197

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God dammit. I can only fap so many times a day before Im sbooting blanks.

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@ultrome

Link to the Ragnarok online one?

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@moximoore

Probably the funniest part =P

@dekir

Try Ver9 and Hana Hook for some ball busting =P

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Which page is mind control and what method is being used?

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p 198 Cluadia, thought in should be Claudia =)

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is there a chance that you translate that as well? /g/1426859/2c663854ea/

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Damn, the story is so sad but at the same time so good I was fapping only through maybe first 70 pages and just reading the rest.

Kinda feel bad for fapping to it, though. But that mind break is, probably, the greatest among all other mind break stories.

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That omake at the end is priceless. It's extra funny since it's attached to this book.

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Can we get a salute for Alex here in the comments? The NTR boy who tried his damndest and ALMOST got her back.
Almost.

He got further than most, boys, there's some respect owed for that.

o7
Good try buddy. good try.

>go back to fapping after the salute tho obvs its still hot as fuck, I aint no vanillafag XD. Just gotta respect the guy givin it his all.

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Damn best porn manga I've read ever.
Where can I buy a physical copy of this? I really feel the author earned very good money for putting that much work into his craft... goddamn, I didn't even cum the plot was so good!

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seems some new work is coming out
http://ymdgogogogo.blog.fc2.com/blog-entry-88.html#more

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Am I the only one absolutely obsessed with the sister from pg. 159? The "pacing" of that page with how it jumps right to her already broken right after her brother died trying to give her time to run away is just some next-level shit. I'm so glad that she shows up again in pg. 199 looking happier than ever, but I would give anything to see more of her getting mercilessly gangfucked by the lesser orcs since we never got that with Claudia...

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Haven't been this depressed after reading a Hmanga in a while, it's fucked up cause no matter what; the minute his dick went in her there was nothing he could do. Unable to satisfy her, Inable to save her, And will most likely die from burning his soul if he hasn't already. Sucks to be human, scariest part is what human female could resist the temptation? It's not possible. Usually to me alot of ntr try too hard and just end up being annoying or silly, in a way this was a perfect "Tragic story"

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