This is the first time I'm doing any of this, so feel free to do whatever is necessary if any rules are being broken.

RAWS: /g/1379600/4e163afe08/

nice :))) thanks

Base +7, Lostalgia +9, daimmo3dma -8, Goblin_Slayer_Jr. +10

This is the 4th one now.

Base +5, Pr1de +14, Zerk Mahara +6, Void161 +2, ryuukami123 +12, Orengestar +7, onlyhereforonething +9, timbus +12, tobeunforgiven2 +19, MrPonty +6

I am aware this came in after various other translations, and I'm truly sorry for any trouble this may have caused.
It just felt too bad abandoning a project halfway through, and I was eventually convinced to post it either way.
Oh well, I guess I shouldn't be so slow if there's ever a next time

Base +3, breanyman +6, glvdtr +24, Acerola +13, Jack Stark +6, Raift +9, JohnUltimate23 +5, Void161 +2, Imsolo +6, jaypea +6, Żyś +10, Alphazerol +6, Mr.Awesomeness +6, and 19 more...

The second one was an edit of the first, so I'd say it's the third, but I do agree with you... three just isn't enough, we need 4.

On a serious note, I'm all for more people translating a single work if that's what gets people into translating/editing. Other than N04h, I think this was everyone else's first translation/edit, and none of them were just thrown together with minimal effort, so I'm happy to see all of them.

I'm glad you saw the project through sp0i =).

Base +7, breanyman +6, Acerola +13, wotor +6, Junichi069 +6, Xetton +8, Imsolo +6, gearsky +6, DKU +6, LoneHero33 +8, Gtzgold +6, timbus +12, frozenoctorok +1, and 5 more...

thanks, much appreciated.

Base +3, breanyman +6, GA3N +16

This story will never get old. I wish there were more like these.

Base +4, ThanatosNebula76 +8, cocowaxinsaikai +1, HelmutRegner +6, CyborgSamurai +6, Orengestar +7, Alioshin +4, TheBrojangles +6

I'm happy at the amount of love this doujin receives after that horrid ESL machine translation. May you grace sadpanda with more yandere goodness for years to come.

Base +6, gearsky +6, Alioshin +4, TheBrojangles +6, jakeree96 +7

Hey now, I wouldn't look down on ESL machine translations if I were you. I mean, you just read one and all...
Thanks a lot, though

Base +3, jakeree96 -7

1st translation by Neraka Translation > Rough, lots of grammar mistakes, but acceptable in a sense.
2nd translation by N04h and Kafka > Polished around the translations, but typesetting are total fuckery
3rd translation by sp0i > combined both translations' best points.

Great job. 5 stars for this.

P.S. : your font choice also happens to be the best in my opinion. Neraka's is too small for my taste, and I don't need to say about N04H and Kafka, ja?

Base +10, Orengestar +7, Polwath +7, tobeunforgiven2 -19, TheBrojangles +6

God I wish that was me.

Base +6, EllincedeT +9, CyborgSamurai +6, jakeree96 +7

You saved as PNG but used a quite lossy source, next time please do use the raws.

Base +7, JukanX +23, tobeunforgiven2 +19

looks like this site is gonna be gone soon
its been an honor

Base +6, LewdLurk3r +7, HelmutRegner +7, tobeunforgiven2 -19

curious why does this have netorare tag? The male lover was never stolen from him, he doesn't seem to have official relationship with pink girl. If he did wouldn't his sister get the netori tag for trying to steal him away.

Base +1, nooby0112 +7

I don't know how to feel about this...

On one hand, the art is great, and I love the concept of the story.

On the other, the dialogue between them, not to mention the MC's internal dialogue, is just so, so lacking.

Like, he's been drugged and is actively getting raped by his own sister, and the only thing he says is the occasional, unconvincing "stop"? And the only thing going through his head is "shit, it feels good"?

Regardless of how good it felt to him, it seemed quite clear that he was opposed to what was happening, and yet he's just lying there like a dumbass, returning her kisses for whatever reason. In my opinion, he should have resisted her, make her at least work for it a bit and maybe she could succeed in making him calm down somewhat at the very end. But no, it just kept dragging on without any development.

And yes, I know people are gonna be like "it's just porn bruh, chill," but to me, the way that the story is conveyed matters a ton. And unfortunately, in this case it negatively affected the overall rating quite a bit.

Last edited on 10 November 2019, 02:54 UTC.

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