come back with better skills since the teacher Nanao does not intend to continue the story of Mira San. I can not stay with the desire. I'll make an alternative story
the Color image is the last update
Drawn in pencil and colored with mouse. When I make more pages I hope you can support (for a digitizing tablet)
Your skills in drawing are quite good. However, you're essentially asking others to financially support your plagiarizing another artist. It can never be "[your] own doujin" because it's Nanao's. Your work is essentially fan art. I can't speak for others, but I don't believe that many will be interested in supporting a copy over the original.