Sequel to:
/g/1181778/ba518945cf/

I don't know what actual numbering technically applies (are what I've called 1 and 2 the same comic, like the one this is based on? Are all three one 'chapter'?), but this is how it was framed in the thread I found it on, and it breaks it up nicely.

If you find the structure confusing, white pages are linear current time, and the sepia pages are sequential flashbacks.

Based on:
/g/1069407/5a6e5964a6/

Update August 7 2019: Swain is publishing completed lineart to their Tumblr, but it's at a lower resolution than what's here, so I'll bundle those into a new gallery or append them to this one when there's enough.

Despite Swain changing the names, slightly altering the designs this still hasn't progressed much away from the original Loud House comic.
Like the characters are still pretty clearly Lincoln, Luna and Leni.
And if we ever see "Tristam's" friend I'm not gonna act surprised if it turns they're basically cylde or another of Lincoln's friends.

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At least a random lady being crazy and posessive of her brother makes more sense than Luna.

Though a boy not getting suspicious about his mentally unstable sister mentioning him needing to drink a very specific beverage, is sillly.

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@dman69
I don't really get why you and other people I've seen dwell so much on its origins. I daresay you're obsessed with the comparison, instead of just appreciating this story.

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Tell how I'm not supposed to compare when the plot and most of the dialogue is the exact same?
I would be able to appreciate this story as it's own, if it proved to be distinctive enough to be called its own story but it hasn't it's still the same thing as the Loud House comic, only with different art, more page padding (I mean seriously this chapter is just the second half of the original's first chapter), and the fact this keeps trying to pretend it isn't associated with the Loud House for whatever reason Swain said that I still don't buy.

Just like I'm allowed to critique something like a Harry Potter movie compared to the original book I should be allowed to compare this to the original comic.
And I should be allowed to criticize the decision to try and divorce the story from the source material if it's going to change nothing other than the characters names.

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Confirmed obsessed.

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So you're just going to be child then.

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@southrim
The DA page has higher resolution: https://www.deviantart.com/swainart

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wtf is with the pg-13 nudity?

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