Translated and edited by me.
Raws:
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Overall an enjoyable story, but there are a few grammatical errors in the translation.

Page 2, panel 2 - not sure if it's his way of talking or if you forgot the 2nd G in getting.
Page 3, panel 2 - past simple tense with did uses base form of the verb, so here it should be bewitch, not bewitched.
Page 5, panel 3 - same as above. It should be did I WAKE her up, not did I woke her up.
Page 11, panel 2 - same issue as on page 5.

Base +7, bigscuba +3

额头那里原来是眉毛吗？

Base +6

@Siperi
Yep, sorry about that. English is not my mother tongue. I went to the forum a few days ago asking for a volunteer willing to proofread this but had no luck. :/

Base +19, bigscuba +3, Haruka Aiphos +5, Barrakketh +6

a raccoon is fine too

Base +9, bigscuba +3, tscecest +6, Kabdra +8, Forgunia +5, Haruka Aiphos +5, reziak +6, Kinights +26, Oscha +6, RedUnit10 +9, Żyś +10, kamisking +6, MobileCrusader +6, and 2 more...

Amazing girl, amazing doujin, but that censorship is way too big :/

Base +5

@bfrost:
Feel free to PM me directly next time. Depending on what other projects I am working on it might take a couple or few days.

Base +42, Barrakketh +6

Clever girl :0

Base +6