When my older sister run out of her bullet while the gun fight!

Ah. Not bad at all. I like what I see. Much better than the previous one in my honest opinion. Don't know about others, but for me, this is pretty great.

If you don't mind me asking, since I'm also trying to make my first H-Work, is 200 pages considered a bit too many?

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Thanks a million T-Rex. Your 3D request is already on my list. So It might be release soon but the character of the story must be my creation however they still wearing the same costume as they were. Sorry for my bad English I try to explain it to understand easily. T-T. The reason why I use my character creation are 1.Copyright 2.New looks 3.My Aneki concept (I am a SisCon)

Nope It is not too many if you tear them to Part 1 = 100 pages Part 2 = 100 pages

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@Aneki13 Eh your English is fine. I am very honored good sir.

That's the problem. If I tear them apart, half the story would be a bit confusing, and I'm a bit lazy to put in any dialogues at the moment. Will take your advice into consideration though. If you don't mind another question, how much fucking scene would be enough, as in, how many of him thrusting into her would be sufficient? Sorry for the weird question.

You a SisCon huh. Well that explains the title. I am more of a MamaCon (is that the correct term?) with a spicy dash of bully NTR. What can I say man. I love me some sweet, sweet muscle thicc milfs getting hammered by shotas.

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