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(C96) [STANKY (yozo)] Kishiou no Kimochi Ii Ana -Alter- (Fate/Grand Order) [English]

(C96) [STANKY (yozo)] 騎士王のキモチイイ穴-オルタ- (Fate/Grand Order) [英訳]

Doujinshi
Posted:2019-09-20 20:20
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Language:English  TR
File Size:32.96 MB
Length:31 pages
Favorited:2261 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.67

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Posted on 20 September 2019, 20:20 UTC by:   I_Leopard    PM
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List of major liberties taken for those who want to bitch about the translation instead of jack off:

p11 "deep chinpo plunge": This is actually literal, just made the wording more cringy to make it sound more like a special move

p13 Gilligan part: sentence structure was moved around

p15 womb kisses: originally just pushes/pressure

p15 cute denial: added in to emphasize what Artoria was saying

p15 pussy's new master: originally just master, added extra words to not confuse with original master

p16 first sentence: yeah didn't really know how to phrase this. meaning is 80% the same

p19 chamberpot: originally armpit-visible mouth toilet; no way in hell that's gonna fit in the speech bubble

p21 last sentence: originally what a good ejaculation; sounded out of place and awk

p22: helper, supporter, role, hard point at work, all not 100% sure about

p23: give your master my regards: originally smth like do your best with your master, not sure

p25: Artoria is still sounding arrogant/proud here; words didn't fit actions so I changed it

p26: added forever, sex with you is the best: originally just had her repeating ill be your sex friend

p27: orginally: the feeling I couldn't get with master is here, and time to sign the contract, take this!

p28: second to last sentence I'm only 60% sure about
Posted on 20 September 2019, 21:26 UTC by:   thondam    PM
Score +243
Nice NTR twist from the first one. Much better when its not all that obvious. Appreciate all the hard translation work =03!
Posted on 20 September 2019, 21:29 UTC by:   DinoCock    PM
Score +107
What’s with the string of Artoria NTR?
I’m very grateful, but I’m also very confused.
Posted on 20 September 2019, 21:55 UTC by:   Lanc3r    PM
Score +3
Awesome to see a translation for this great doujin.
Posted on 20 September 2019, 22:26 UTC by:   B1u3z    PM
Score +329
Thanks but I might wait for a higher quality version, image-, typesetting-, and translation-wise.
Posted on 20 September 2019, 23:35 UTC by:   Minamoto_Soki    PM
Score -49
Thank you for the translation.
Posted on 20 September 2019, 23:39 UTC by:   DDDgs    PM
Score +50
@DinoCock She´s vanilla as hell so of course she´s gonna be target to NTR
Posted on 20 September 2019, 23:39 UTC by:   sshions    PM
Score -28
@thondam it was telegraphed obvious from the first one though
Posted on 21 September 2019, 00:10 UTC by:   Maniax4    PM
Score +207
>Arutoria
Posted on 21 September 2019, 00:14 UTC by:   GuroLover12    PM
Score +3
No romance in fate series.
Posted on 21 September 2019, 00:24 UTC by:   hafini    PM
Score +29
Faceless being is here to steal your girl.
Posted on 21 September 2019, 00:39 UTC by:   Kevin9noob    PM
Score +97
Here's the Vanilla prequel, but we all know this NTR one is the superior version.

/g/1346911/a2f7a726ff/
Posted on 21 September 2019, 00:58 UTC by:   AhKai    PM
Score -3
chinpo plunge!
Posted on 21 September 2019, 01:07 UTC by:   Overlol    PM
Score +486
The cuckest part is how this is not even a proper translation since even the translator admit at the end he doesn't know japanese and made up most dialogues to "make it hotter"
Posted on 21 September 2019, 01:22 UTC by:   7se7en    PM
Score +70
Wait this guy had an erection for more than three hours? He's in danger!
Posted on 21 September 2019, 01:30 UTC by:   MrPanda133    PM
Score -26
The text may be invented but hey atleast i get the context of why or how Artoria was doing NTR in this doujin lol
Posted on 21 September 2019, 01:34 UTC by:   Settler_5335    PM
Score +55
Ha! You thought I was a wholesome doujinshi because of the first part?! But it was actually me! Kono Netorare da!
Posted on 21 September 2019, 05:17 UTC by:   gseed    PM
Score +23
need this in original reso as well
Posted on 21 September 2019, 05:47 UTC by:   dgjdgjdgj    PM
Score +74
Alter version, what if, another timeline, my ass. This is legit sequel isn't it ? For those of you who don't know, artist claimed that this is what so called "possibility" if this turn out to be NTR.

But that is bullshit self-defense claim no matter how you look this is definitely a sequel.
Last edited on 21 September 2019, 08:14 UTC.
Posted on 21 September 2019, 11:03 UTC by:   555666777    PM
Score +14
Please tell me he's gonna continue this series!!
Posted on 21 September 2019, 14:35 UTC by:   poke--    PM
Score +24
I knew the mangaka couldn't resist making NTR story
Posted on 21 September 2019, 19:50 UTC by:   Sonicfanx1    PM
Score +10
Vanilla or NTR, I'll take any Artoria.
Posted on 22 September 2019, 23:58 UTC by:   lw123789    PM
Score +10
Arutoria ??? Dafuq ???
Posted on 23 September 2019, 10:24 UTC by:   dante_vergil    PM
Score +6
Well, that would explain why the previous volume didn't have much x-rays aside from this one.
Posted on 03 November 2019, 19:11 UTC by:   Pimmy Jage    PM
Score -2
thank you for the meal, now i wonder where's gudako...
Posted on 23 January 2020, 21:53 UTC by:   CantheDandyMan    PM
Score +1
Lmao at that bet. She literally gets nothing if she wins and he gets to fuck her twice twelve times. Dude didn't even bother with the obligatory "blackmail boyfriend with proof of him raping his girlfriend."
Posted on 04 April 2020, 14:13 UTC by:   101bob101    PM
Score +14
NTR logic is retarded by default but boy howdy that bet is some smooth brain shit.

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