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[TheGreenHouse] Dirty Business - A Toph Story Ch.1 (Avatar: The Last Airbender)

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Posted:2019-09-28 13:11
Parent:1420969
Visible:Yes
Language:English  
File Size:48.95 MB
Length:50 pages
Favorited:242 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.44

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Posted on 28 September 2019, 13:11 UTC by:   stylestar    PM
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My first new project of 2018, yet another ATLA AU story, with Toph as the main focus. Something to dust the joints off and really get back into posting again. Updates pending like all my other projects.
Posted on 14 February 2018, 06:06 UTC by:   kenoh2889    PM
Score +86
This is really good.
my only issue is it's kinda hard to follow in some areas since its black and white.
maybe little arrows to show which way to read?
Other than that I'm loving how this has turned out so far can't wait for more
Posted on 14 February 2018, 06:36 UTC by:   lokkkas    PM
Score +52
for future readers, the line in the middle of each picture is essentially a fold in a book. One that's read american style left right.
Posted on 14 February 2018, 07:01 UTC by:   Tristail    PM
Score +16
Already loving it. Keep going :D
Posted on 01 June 2018, 04:26 UTC by:   Gunkshot    PM
Score +28
holy shit. Using bending to enhance sex is such a wonderful idea.
Posted on 07 June 2018, 22:04 UTC by:   Crociere    PM
Score +20
fuck. not even my greatest dickbending techniques is enough for this masterpiece!
Posted on 29 June 2018, 21:38 UTC by:   newtype711    PM
Score +17
Better story-line brewing here than in most of the epilogue comics. All it needs is a big baddie and / or the spirits and this could be the best side story yet.
Plus the show already confirms that Toph had a short, sexual relation so if we push back Toph's growth spur then this could be canon. All summed up,
stuff is good.
Posted on 29 November 2018, 15:21 UTC by:   bbobb8484    PM
Score +12
Jeez, Mr. self-insert better be careful not to cut himself on all that edge
Posted on 30 November 2018, 02:35 UTC by:   stylestar    PM
Score +13
Can't really call Chan Lau a self-insert. Author Avatar? You could make the argument, but I'm black, so there's that. I wouldn't really call him an edgelord, either. A disillusioned Anti-social itinerant spelunker/jack of all trades with Fire National leanings and a very low opinion of Aang was what I was going for. I think I left my self-insert days far , far behind. Looking back , those were some embarrassing times.
Posted on 22 June 2019, 01:45 UTC by:   Alurker    PM
Score +6
Not bad at all. This looks like a draft but if you were to finish it up, you might get some attention on patreon.
Posted on 28 September 2019, 14:19 UTC by:   Sir Vicious    PM
Score +6
Love your work...
Could be easier to read but aside from that I like the story.
Posted on 28 September 2019, 18:17 UTC by:   Pedrobeartimon    PM
Score +7
I love it, but I think the one thing that would make this *great* is if you'd back-light trace over it using clean, solid lines
Posted on 09 November 2019, 10:31 UTC by:   negavamas    PM
Score +9
It's really good, it just needs a little bit of cleaning.

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