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[Shourai] Fateless [English] (Episode 1)

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Posted:2019-09-30 20:23
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Language:English  
File Size:43.06 MB
Length:87 pages
Favorited:316 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.41

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Posted on 30 September 2019, 20:23 UTC by:   Evankstein    PM
Uploader Comment
Hello everyone!

First of all, big thanks to everyone who has been following my stories, I actually thought no one would like the very first episode and now we are up to this point. Big thanks for the support!

And of course, to the ones who support me in patreon, you guys are awesome, seriously.

As always, leave a comment on what do you think about the episode, the characters, the story or whatever you like to write.

Speaking of characters, what type of character would you guys like to see again (the ones I did through the story) or what type of character would you like to be introduced in the future?

Consider to visit my patreon and see whats going on in there: https://www.patreon.com/Evankstein

Until next time!
Posted on 30 September 2019, 22:40 UTC by:   Number1TioFan    PM
Score +13
You really make some nice stuff!
Normally, I'm not into genderbending stuff, but I like your stuff!
I just might get into this thanks to you...
In all seriousness, this is hot!
Thanks, Evankstein!
Posted on 01 October 2019, 01:57 UTC by:   The Goat is Watching    PM
Score +18
I kinda like the character designs, and the premise is solid enough, but I think think this starts off way too abruptly.

Red Eyes here just wakes up and tackles the other girl, all "GIVE ME MY BODY", but I have no idea who any of these characters are. Even after the introduction, it still feels like we skipped over a few pages or a chapter that would have set all this up.
Last edited on 01 October 2019, 03:34 UTC.
Posted on 01 October 2019, 04:06 UTC by:   Evankstein    PM
Score +7
@The Goat is Watching Hey thanks for your comment dude. I was hoping for this part to be explained with the previous episode and the "Milky Mistery" story, but yeah you're right I should've explained better the beginning of this new arc. I guess I'm still trying to balance the duration ond lore vs the sexual/erotic content so it won't get too boring. Still, thank you for your comment.
Posted on 01 October 2019, 07:20 UTC by:   invalido    PM
Score +8
yay!!! now waiting for the milky mistery :D

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