This is my first rewrite. Made in honor of an old buddy of mine that's no longer with us.
Some of this was done by him, with some refinements here and there.
He was going to release it on here many months ago.
I'd like to think he is glad I took up the reigns and gave it a home.
Well hope you guys enjoy!

~Underhill~

Raw can be found here: /g/1321503/fadf2e9ee8/

Thanks for turning this into an English version. Rewrite is pretty decent. Thanks for adopting this and for finishing your buddy's work.

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So you’re olddog’s replacement? The age of shitty rewrites begins anew...

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Status_Effect please tell me what you didn't like about it so I can improve. :)

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Many just dislike rewrite in general out of principle, protecting the originality of the source material.

Back when I know basically zero English or Japanese. it is more "stimulating" to just make up dialogue in my mind as I read for "research purpose"

You should ask those who actually don't mind and enjoy rewrite.

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this is not darknight translation, it is yours?

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Just make some funny shit up for rewrites. Like Food Network for example. It's a classic that's been around for ages and hasn't been driven into the ground by all the rewrite hating bandwagoners.

"Who in their right mind would frost a cake with their butt?" is a line that's well known. My personal favorite was "I DRIVE A DODGE STRATUS STEP THE FUCK OFF". So some stupid shit to be funny is a better way to rewrite and appease the crowd than to legitimately try to rewrite. It's not worth your time otherwise outside of your own personal satisfaction.

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Where is page 95 from? I don't see it in the raw.

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Guys chill. This has long been fully translated so you can read that. He isn't hurting anything making s rewrite of an already translated work.

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colddish it's just some photoshop :P
or in my case gimp with gmic

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sonictmp this has been translated many months ago man

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Wow, this website really hates rewrites. I think this rewrite is actually pretty well done. Story feels more fleshed out than the original. I always thought Love Mary was rushed. Great work.

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Jimbo_extreme thanks I appreciate you saying that.

Last edited on 15 October 2019, 07:08 UTC.

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anyone know why darkis version isnt availiable anymore?

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to underhill th
hi
I think your rewrite is good
but will you continue the story ??
we are just on the middle of it

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I actually ended it here on purpose. I didn't like the rest of the story too much and it felt rushed unfortunately.
Also thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

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@underhill th
do you know japanease
becuase they made an audio for the story
http://ktcom.jp/unreal/unreal82
also you can at least re write lapis corruption

also there is an anime adaption coming in 2020

Last edited on 12 December 2019, 17:12 UTC.

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Wait I'm alive though... And the last part Isn't finished. It would have been much better if I had the time but life gave me lemons lately.

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