It's literally copied from the DevilHS stuff
Don't you have any kind of pride?

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But it’s not..

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@Quantequila: what do you mean by that? is it (/s/ad616380e3/1429013-1) the "DevilHS stuff" that was copied?
because it just a run-of-the-mill pose for me.. every "hardcore" Western H.Artist already draw that, and DevilHS may not even be the first..

so please provide the source of your claim, since it's a quite serious statement against an active artist who shares his stuff on Ex for free.. if it s true, then shame on Pegasus777.. if it s wrong, shame on you..

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Well, there is one blatantly obvious critique one can make... How is she puking up cum if he's fucking her vaginally? The trope works if he was fucking her anally, the theory being he's cumming so heavily that it floods her entire digestive system and overflows out her mouth.

But in this case, it's very deliberately showing him pumping her vagina, and there's no connective path to the mouth from there, period.

This may not be a trace, but it is a sign that he's taking a concept without understanding how that concept works at all.

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If we want to go down that Rabbit Hole - technically Super Girl is an Alien... and therefore Human rules of Biology may not apply.

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