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(C96) [PLANT (Tsurui)] Itadakimasu Anata-sama | I Crave You (THE IDOLM@STER) [English] [incogna777]

(C96) [PLANT (鶴井)] いただきますあなた様 (アイドルマスター) [英訳]

Doujinshi
Posted:2019-11-01 12:48
Parent:None
Visible:Yes
Language:English  TR
File Size:57.24 MB
Length:34 pages
Favorited:1693 times
Rating:
363
Average: 4.69

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Posted on 01 November 2019, 12:48 UTC by:   incogna777    PM
Uploader Comment
I was doing a translation of this (very slowly), then saw another uploader also did it. I read a comment that poor grammar translations often discouraged other translators from offering their own translations later, and that a higher quality write-up might never appear. Bearing that in mind, I finished my work, with the hope that the dialogue and narrative sounded a little more natural to a native English speaker. I have this idea of searching around, finding various works with the "poor grammar" tag, and attempting to produce a more natural write-up.

This is intended to have slightly better grammar and a more idiomatic use of English than its existing translation. Let me know if the typesetting needs work--as I'm a little worse at that--and let me know what you think.

TL note: P-head is you and that is your own cock, dear reader.
Posted on 01 November 2019, 13:06 UTC by:   DJNoni    PM
Score +72
Raw: /g/1468178/ae7e81b9e1/
Previous English translation: /g/1489470/dfaadf8439/ by CGrascal

Thanks for this fix, it's a lovely scene which deserves a good translation. Glory hole table - such a hot fantasy! And good x-ray on p. 32.
Posted on 01 November 2019, 13:54 UTC by:   bigscuba    PM
Score +37
This is much appreciated. Thanks.
Posted on 01 November 2019, 14:54 UTC by:   MichaelJohn    PM
Score +102
jesus

this doujin is the epitome of savoring the dick
Posted on 01 November 2019, 15:21 UTC by:   nabusco    PM
Score +15
Oh fuck my dick
Posted on 01 November 2019, 16:11 UTC by:   Secluded    PM
Score +207
Anyone else kind of expecting her to just take out a knife and fork and start literally eating it? No? Just me? Okay.
Posted on 01 November 2019, 16:21 UTC by:   DDDgs    PM
Score +21
I admit I was a bit worried about having missed a snuff tag, but the star rating told me otherwise
Posted on 01 November 2019, 19:08 UTC by:   源亚伦    PM
Score +5
这是什么奇特的play？
Posted on 01 November 2019, 23:12 UTC by:   Maurox    PM
Score +37
Holy fuck, that expression on p.17
Every goddamn time ( = ワ=)
Posted on 02 November 2019, 04:52 UTC by:   0ld0neEye    PM
Score +44
She must have ordered the spotted dick.

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