This is an amateur translation I made for this one since no one did.

Better an amateur translation than no translation, and trust me when I say there's much worse than this. There's a fair few pages as well, so thanks for putting in the effort and sharing :)

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- Prove to me you're not a knight by sucking my dick
Interesting, continue.

Also I don't get the last page.

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Raw: /g/1430018/859779c97e/
Chinese: /g/1438474/254f6fa24a/
Korean: /g/1446494/71aa144986/

Thanks for your effort - anything is better than nothing. And the artwork is great, with lots of lovely x-ray!

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Damn, that Chinese typesetting is crazy high-quality. I'm not sure that I've ever seen typesetting that so closely mimics the original Japanese down to using the proper style of brush-stroke and proper 3D angle.

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Thanks!

@Wilfriback the joke's just that her egg cells are going after the sperm instead of how it usually works; the characters on their heads basically say ovum and sperm

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Hot damn, this is quite something. Love the ending where the egg cells just sucked the sperm in.

Also, page 21 is untranslated.

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what did i just read??

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Why would you use the Chinese version instead of Japanese raw tho?

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Fuck this shit. Irotenya's works don't deserve this.

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@zinos6 Then do it yourself

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Quoting an old comic scan group: "If you think you can do a better job then go ahead".

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They dress in such a way to show off their bodies and then have the audacity to complain when guys talk about it...

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Those uniforms are just perfect

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@BamBlackStar While I'm not complaining, I do think disregarding critics with "do it yourself" is stupid. I'm sure we all remember how Goatse/Laruffi was a thing on this site, no? Of course insulting won't help, but neither will blindly accepting everything. Unlike mainstream stuffs, 18+ stuffs rarely get another translation, if one got a crappy job done on then that's it. So the crappy job actually lowers the chance of a proper translation to happen. So I think it's best to point out things that can be improved to the translator, instead of brush it off with "better than nothing".

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So asssertive at the end =P

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"I will accept anything because it's better than nothing" is a destructive mentality that rewards people for not putting in the minimum effort of not doing things such as using random fonts, broken MTL engrish, or a Chinese scan when the raw is fine.
If someone wants to translate I'll even commit to do the editing, as I previously have done so for low quality work.

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I love this artist's style, but the stories would be so much hotter if the gals didn't run around like sluts by default. Let them start as dignified characters, damnit!
The gap is important, the gap!

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Quality meme faggots in comments, as always

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Thank you everyone for both the encouragement and the criticism. Although my intentions were to try my best (I have zero knowledge in Chinese) to translate this doujin since no one else did, I understand & agree that "better than nothing" is a really bad mentality to have here as it affects translator's priority. But for now I hope that everyone can respect each other's criticism.

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Wow, this artist is improving fast! Love that he's sticking with the same style, storywise, too. It's very novel.

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I feel like the artstyle has a strong resemblance to Takeda Hiromitsu's style.

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