Hey Moiarte, thanks for all your work, it's pretty great! But i think you should focus on fewer storylines, you end up opening too many fronts, and it gets really confusing with so many characters. For example: on this chapter, if you focused only on the initial mother and daughter having the guy in their house it would be totally satisfatory and amazing. So, in this case the best storyline got only 3 pages, do you see what i mean? Anyway, you are very talented, take this advice as a compliment and good critic ok? Best regards to you mate
