First one, so forgive any small mistakes.

I can forgive you because of the cute story.
And in one side, you tried your best.
Despite that, i'm only a reader so i leave to professional to help you ! :-)

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Using a pressure point to awaken the bestial side of the guy who has been trying to control his lust of you seems counterproductive unless you're getting him to be honest with his desires, lol.

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This starts off as a clumsy but accurate translation, but then goes nuts towards the middle. The rewrite tag is accurate.

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骑虎难下

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Yeah, initially google translate was able to get the message across, but as it got in deeper it made less and less sense, so I just decided fuck it. I'd rather have it be comprehensible than accurate.

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Why was this machine translated from korean? The source is japanese.... Comic Gaira is a japanese anthology mag.

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Meh I can live with a good ball park translation till a better translation comes along, still better than nothing. Thanks for the attempt, I've seen a whole lot worse.

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I've read worse translation you've done a bang up job if you ask me keep up the good work.

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I don't understand why anyone would turn down a tiger girl in a Chinese dress. I have never once turned down a tiger girl in a Chinese dress and I don't think anyone here can honestly say they have either.

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Pg 13 MAKE MY MONSTER GROW!

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souske411 you gotta tell me where your hooking up with these tiger girls my areas lacking severely.

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Rewrites are cancer since they trick people into thinking it's a proper translation when it's really a fan fic.

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To quote myself from a previous gallery on my opinions on rewrites.

"I know that I'm probably going to get flamed from this, but I wonder why when one rewrites a furry story no one bats an eye, but when any other doujinshi is rewritten there's a storm. To me I wish these stories, no matter the type, were all translated. I would rather have the story remain in Japanese rather than to have the original story disrespected with a rewrite."

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Do someone say where are the English translations of the volumes 1 and 2 of 『燃えよ肉球拳』(Moeyo nikukyūken)?

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