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[Shiwasu no Okina] Please! Freeze! Please! #1 (COMIC AUN 2019-04) [English] [CopyOf] [Digital]

[師走の翁] Please! Freeze! Please! #1 (COMIC 阿吽 2019年4月号) [英訳] [DL版]

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Posted:2020-01-12 19:09
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Language:English  TR
File Size:9.07 MB
Length:38 pages
Favorited:804 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.53

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Posted on 12 January 2020, 19:09 UTC by:   CopyOf    PM
Uploader Comment
Someone else already translated #3 in this series and I really wanted to know how it all started. So here's #1. I'm planning on doing #2 as well, but I'll hold off on #4 (which, as of the date I'm posting, I don't think has been released) in case the other translator wants to take a crack at it.

Just as a note, it was really hard to find #1, I had to get it from Sensei's twitter feed, then use the Chinese version to get it in the right order. It was totally worth it though. I really enjoyed the slow escalation and that first shaky moment of wondering how far she'd let him go. Whew!
Posted on 12 January 2020, 19:24 UTC by:   LearnJPwithH    PM
Score +59
Nice work, this has been in the todo bucket but I'm still doing a couple C97 releases before I'd get to this. A note on the page res quality, the ones posted on twitter aren't quite as nice as the RAW scans out of comic AUN:
(Ch.1): /s/01f1b7ea0b/1434409-4
(Ch.2): /s/e2277f474b/1521343-32
(Ch.2 Alt Scan): /g/1412151/ab752f9ccd/
(Ch.3): /s/6be7c9483b/1473319-33
(Ch.4): /s/d87de327b0/1508139-422

(Ch.3 EN): /g/1488835/f3d05a7676/
Posted on 12 January 2020, 19:24 UTC by:   57welder    PM
Score +7
Ahh Yes, How frustrating can you get. excellent artwork, good storyline
Posted on 12 January 2020, 19:31 UTC by:   Juggernaut Santa    PM
Score +92
A story starting with part 3 feels weird. Thanks for picking it up from part 1. Looking forward to the rest!
Posted on 12 January 2020, 20:34 UTC by:   Supersquigi    PM
Score +42
That was very nice of those two to help him out.
Posted on 12 January 2020, 20:36 UTC by:   bachiko    PM
Score +10
the picture size aaaaaaaaaaaa
thanks anyway
Posted on 13 January 2020, 06:49 UTC by:   KanataE    PM
Score +35
Posted on 13 January 2020, 06:52 UTC by:   burburbur    PM
Score +30
Hey I'm a big fan of shiwasu no okina so I'm glad someone finally took up this series to translate it as it'll get more exposure that way.

But one thing i'd like to give feedback on are the translations, i'm not super good in Japanese but definitely fluent enough to read up on SnO's work, i think your version of this translation is slightly off.

I'm not sure if it was intended as different translators might want to give off different vibes but your version sounds abit more horny...? aggresive...?

Sorry I'm not too sure of the exact way to describe it.

One mistake I did find though is on bottom right panel of page 15, the girls asked "did it calm down abit" and not "did it come out" and the male MC replied "it calmed down abit..."

Apologies if this commend would come of as rude but I think the translation can be abit more accurate and the translation gives off a different vibe than what is intended.

Thank you very much for the hard work on translating and editing this chapter.
Posted on 13 January 2020, 11:34 UTC by:   B4z73rd    PM
Score +23
At least this work seems a lot more visually appealing than the other ones of Shiwasu no Okina's. His hulking behemoth of a man from his other series can be a bit of a turn off.
Posted on 13 January 2020, 19:05 UTC by:   TheDiabolical    PM
Score +28
Thanks for the translation. I know a work like this where we don't get the payoff at the end can be frustrating, but Okina is great enough artist to make it stimulating regardless and it looks like they've gone the extra mile to focus on expressions and their reactions to the ongoing sexual tension, so it doesn't get boring.
Though it looks like they intend to keep it strictly soft and teasing with little penetration to speak of for the duration. Though they may finally go all the way in the final chapter. So you'll enjoy it best if you don't focus completely on waiting for them to finally do it and just relax and enjoy the messing around. It's makes a nice change of pace every now and then, even if I normally want more and wouldn't be satisfied with it from most artists.
It's like Okina decided to prove they could do an entire tank fill with almost no sex and still make it feel hot and it would still sell regardless. And they're probably right.
Also an interesting change to see them focus on a guy who actually has normal penis side and reacts like a shy complete virgin youth whose had very little intimacy with the opposite sex would when touched by cute girls he has the hots for all of a sudden. Normally they prefer guys who might look unassuming, small or chubby or nerdy but are actually well hung sex machines underneath. They really like that gap in their male characters. But this guy is exactly what he looks like. Which is a nice twist in and of itself.
It'd be nice to see it all translated.
Posted on 13 January 2020, 23:52 UTC by:   GMK8763    PM
Score +64
This is one of the hottest things I've read and there's barely any nudity. I'm impressed.
Posted on 19 January 2020, 13:45 UTC by:   sunshineandlolipops    PM
Score +33
Given the title, I was hoping this'd be the rare Freeza porn, I'm disappointed.
Posted on 02 March 2020, 17:35 UTC by:   CopyOf    PM
Score +8
Awesome! Thanks LearnJPwithH and KanataE. I really wish I'd been able to find those nice scans of 1 and 2 before I started working on these. That's one of the problems with posting magazines like this, it's easy to lose sight of chapters and storylines. I think it's great when people can break these up into posts with just one story / one artist. That makes it much easier for people to translate later on.

Oh! I just checked the feed and LearnJPwithH did it. You rock dude! Wish I'd seen that before I did my crappy version of Ch2. Oh well. Thanks for going back and doing the whole thing! I'm looking forward to having it all with nice scans and in the same font (and probably a better translation too).

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