https://www.melonbooks.co.jp/detail/detail.php?product_id=591499
https://ec.toranoana.jp/tora_r/ec/item/040030796376/

可以，很牛逼

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这尼玛，本子的本子？

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동인지의 동인지 씹 ㅋㅋ

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把其他两位也...

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I guess think of it as a parody?
I don't mind since this is actual action comparing to what MTSP has released the last two comikets...

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@Fapitupapi
Are you talking about Jin? he just being a lazy ass

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果然是橘家姊妹的本啊

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@fapitupapi @x0run the author got the circles blessing to do this

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牛批，二次创作，原作名气影响力还是可以的

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本子的本子，牛批

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楼上把我要说的说完了

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二次创作？！牛逼哦！

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It's so strange seeing one of my favorite MILFs done by a different artist. But I'm happy to see Kyouka return.

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本子的本子 XDDDDD

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看來作者對原作的發展怨念很深呢，强行讓苦主反殺。

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二創的二創??
話說橘家也不算二創吧 應該算原創
不過這個路線我接受不能阿
還是要NTR才對味 (我是不是口味變重了?)

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應該說是原創同人誌的二創同人誌。
其實這很常見，你有沒有看到滿坑滿谷的東方同人誌？那都是原創同人的二創喔！

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果然单靠人体是打不败科技的，科技天下第一、、

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This is a doujin of a doujin lol

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原作的传奇变NTR就是恶心人，要纯爱就纯爱，要NTR就NTR，这两种本子都OK，但是先纯爱后NTR真的很恶心

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同人（指非商业）的同人

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lol what's this fanfiction?
it made remember how much the real one aches for a sequel though

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我tm社保，，，

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So this is indeed a doujin of a doujin where even tho the gang rape happened MC went learned about it and told them that he knew etc.... huh Interesting but.... where does this doujin have ntr or even cheating content tho? THere's none. It's clearly the MC that is having sex with her...

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这样二次创作别人本子可以吗？JIN毕竟是原创作者吧不会有版权纠纷？

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這本作者有先知會jin過了

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도구를 이용한 극복 좋아요

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只能说橘家那本各种意义深入人心

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居然是纯爱本 我有点不适应

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NTR healing doujin? Intriguing...

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毕竟是能让黑兽女王纯爱结局的画师

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作者画的正太都挺可爱的

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Honestly this is great but I would like to see something like reverse ntr so like ntr on the guys who raped them. For one example he watches the video and goes mad like mind break mad and then he becomes and underground boss he’s basically turns into a bad guy and beats up those guys to the point of death but then the girls see what he has become but they failed and regret not being strong enough so they say sorry to him but he’s too far gone and mind break them into loyal sow/slaves because while being a underground he went to a very skill doctor that give him a big dick/cock. Then the guys that raped the girls recover and plot their revenge but come to realize that their moms, aunts, sisters are under the control of Mr. Yuu the mob boss they try to fight and take back moms etc even get the girls they raped back but they get thought a lesson by the girls and family they their master is yuu. That’s when yuu fucks every girl in the room.

And the second example is that yuu gets ntr by them but in front of him that’s when he breaks and he wants to die but he’s says I’m taking you with me so he walks out of the room and goes to the kitchen and grabs a knife goes back into the room where they the guys are distracted because they thought he was leaving good thing for yuu that the guys were fucking the girls Doggystyle next to one another that’s when yuu stabs each of them the back and is about to kill him self but they all scream SCREAM NOOOOOO! At that moment he realized that he must live to punish these sluts addicted to dick so he come up with and idea he’s ask them do they love their big cock they say no but he yells at them so hard that it scares them he’s don’t lie to me that when they admit to him that yes they love their cock but not them then he asked the do you love me they say yes but your crack is to small to pleasure us so that when he cuts off one of guys laying on the floor dick off then he cuts his own he’s says to them they better hurry and implant the bigger dick to him. That when they rush to the hospital and the doctors do an emergency surgery and put the bigger dick on him. Two months pass and girls finally get to see you after a long recovery but walk in on him fucking two nurses and a doctor. Then when they get home they think it’s finally over not realizing that yuu mind is broken and he isn’t the same sweet yuu. Yuu attacks the mother first he take pills so that he doesn’t run out of stamina and fucks to two days of curse taking break here and there the pill don’t affect his mind because it’s already broken from the ntr . But yea he fucks her soo much that she gets scared of the demon they created she can’t rest at all that when her mind breaks and that’s when yuu brands her like a cow saying that she is he’s slave now and continues torturing her with pleasure and pain . Then the sisters turn but he goes easy on the sisters he still mind break to the point of loyalty they get branded too . That’s when he’s auntie and cousins come over and he’s breaks them too .

Ok so I can’t draw for shit lol and I know my grammar suck too so I can’t really bring these into life. So that being said if any artist out there can bring these examples to life you have my permission

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@ saintx415

Were you born a moron or have you perfected being one in your lifetime?

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@bergil. The moron is you if you can’t comprehend that these are my own thoughts on how it should have ended
Wishing that someone can make it a reality. But at end of the day everyone has their own opinions and you Calling someone a moron For expressing their opinion or wish for a different ending just shows your low iq and low status in Society. Nuff said peasant.

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I see, you are not only a moron but also a butturt bitch who gets easily triggered. I'm glad to learn that lol.

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@bergil Thank you 🙏 so much for proving my point about You . Triggered ? Hahaha no not at all. If I was triggered I would not waste my time commenting on here I would do something way more sinister to you. But I’m guessing someone like yourself wouldn’t believe me either way. So it’s ok. I really wanna know what you will comment next probably something low class. Come on little doggy what you gonna comment?

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@ saintx415

Sorry, I can't understand what you say with that big black cock in your mouth try to remove it first then talk "internet tough guy" lol.

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@bergil. That’s a good 🐕 for commenting again but such a disappointment for such a lame comment. Internet tough guy that’s funny coming from you. And if I were to do something your the type of bitch who would be the first one to call the cops or any kind of Law enforcement. That’s why I said I could but I won’t 👈 this is not me try to tough I’m just stating facts that’s all. But think what u will its cool.. Oh one last thing please don’t get pissy the last thing I want to do is spady you or is it neuter you ah well it doesn’t matter. Well I’m going back to work and you can go back to your games lol o and bergil I’ll be seeing you s....

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Currently being translated to English by NHNL Translations!

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