Update: Added page 53. Added missing text on page 20 (IMG19). Sorry about that.
Raw: /g/1542929/211d1f418b/
Requested by Anon. Thanks 981134 for the raw.

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Artist info + Store link:
Artist’s Twitter: https://twitter.com/fuetakishi
Artist’s Pixiv: https://www.pixiv.net/users/427676
Toranoana: https://ec.toranoana.jp/tora_r/ec/item/040030793366/
FANZA: https://www.dmm.co.jp/dc/doujin/-/detail/=/cid=d_167534/

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Didn't spot anything I'd particularly complain about too much redrawing- and English-wise. (Some things could be rephrased better imo.) I can see some slight differences in the actual translation from the other version. (This TL makes more sense.) It's also nice that you translated and typesetted the voiced sounds in the bubbles. (Looks like some effort.) A little sick of everyone using that standard heart font, but oh well. Nice job. Thanks. This version seems decent enough to download and keep.

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After reading the entire story up to this point, I don't feel sorry for this woman...

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What story bro?

Base +9, faggotop +6, Rol10ultra +6, cochrane +23, mrfrustrationman +6, Hyoros -13, aurst +7

Page 53 is missing.

Base +6, asriel02 +7, Rol10ultra +6

The missing page has been added, thanks for pointing that out.

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Just hoping the little bro not join or other man join his Harem.

Base +6, Rol10ultra +6

Page20 texts is missing on 2nd panel.

Base +6, Rol10ultra +6

The translation seems so much better, great job! Next chapter might be the end though :(

Last edited on 30 January 2020, 00:43 UTC.

Base +4, Megaton +45, dankestdungeon +17, Rol10ultra +6

If Mari is so sexually frustrated and dildos aren't doing it for her, she shoulda went looking for some dudes after the breakup. Also the dude was an idiot for playing along with the kid (well, I guess no one can think reasonably with Yui in front like that) and Yui was stupid not to inform him of the full details beforehand.

Base +7, Rol10ultra +6, Dash-Dash-Dash -7, kikimaru024 +20

The other translations got me out when they kepr mixing ballet and volley while it was pretty obvious from the images alone. This one seems much better. Thanks!

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update on new issue: https://twitter.com/fuetakishi/status/1237654284298104832?s=20

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someone please uplaud the last one

Does anyone have this https://www.pixiv.net/fanbox/creator/427676/post/888358

Last edited on 23 March 2020, 19:35 UTC.

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