This is from Girls forM vol.20 which has been axed, so I'm not sure whether it's going to get deleted or not. But anyway, I still translated it.
You can buy the whole thing here by 1100 Yen: https://www.dlsite.com/books/work/=/product_id/BJ226370.html
It's the last story on GFM, and the artist is no one but the well-known cruel Yamahata Rian.
You can support him here by spending 300 Yen a month to become his fan: https://www.pixiv.net/fanbox/creator/705119

Tbh this wasn't even too brutal for Yamahata Rian's standards. No branding, no urethra insertion, no blood at all. To be fair they looked kinda tame in their treatment, for now.

Though I feel the whole "the scoring system is biased towards women" is kinda silly. It would've worked just fine even without it. People with high scores enslave ones with low scores. Full stop.
Those girls had a very high score, he had less than 100. Still would have worked tbh.

edit: I agree with you, I also like this more and yes, defintely, it is more out of the comfort zone compared to other femdom artists (without going to extreme levels such as some stories of Mame).
But this is how hentai femdom can go beyond rl femdom by pushing beyond some boundaries such as freedom, etc.

Last edited on 03 February 2020, 00:03 UTC.

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@Juggernaut Santa
I accept that this work is less brutal than his other works, and maybe that's why it's far better. There was no harsh ballbusting (just three kicks to nuts and one slap to the balls) and no considerable damage to our boy. But considering the average standard, it's still cruel when compared with the other artists. I mean, try putting on a cage as small as that, which has tiny sharp thorns at its base, and then try to get hard. It'd be pure hell! And to think they're stimulating his prostate too by pegging.

But maybe Rian realized he has to be less severe in drawing female characters, to be nicer and allow readers to feel the story as a Masochist. But anyway, the only reason I enjoyed it was Miyana's dress lol! It's hot AF!

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I want my score to be 0

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Page 10: "public hair" is a fun typo

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@webspider
Hahaha, thanks for mentioning. It seems I'd been too much into public right then in that scene! Lol.

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YES

thankyou for this translation

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@BehnamPersian what do you mean by girls forM having been axed? no more anthologies?

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@Alzack11
From what I've heard, it's apparently the last volume of GFM.

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WTF I love China now.

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So this is supposed to be based on China's social credit system? Well, I guess through the eyes of a femdom lover.

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@Juggernaut Santa

Yamahata Rian isn't really that brutal, it's just the typical ballbusting and I don't think there was ever blood in his works, what I do love about him is that the girls in his comics don't have any affection or feelings towards the male.

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@Juggernaut Santa
I guess Yamahata Rian sensei figured that it would be an all you can fuck festival for men if equality is implemented in such a system, lol.

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Man, I can't believe Girls ForM is ending. It was a good run, but I don't know what is gonna fill this hole now... lul...

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Oi whats the fucking point of you're school grades mattering if anyone walking past can just press a button to fuck your score hahahahahaha.
You aced that test but stacy says you're a cunt so minus 50.

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I just realized something about Yamahata Rian that's been bothering me. You never see boobs. He never draws girls with their tits out. At most, he draws them in their underwear like he does here. At least, not in any of his femdom stuff.

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@cyminum how do you know that it is the last of GirlsForM ?

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Sucks ass that Girls ForM is ending but hopefully something else will take its place. China be like. This is so hot, Yamahata Rian stay making some of the best Femdom content.

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So this is basically China but run by feminist bonobos.

@438cac
Some guys like to be dominated by pretty girls and some girls like to dominate cute boys. This is just that same power dynamic expanded onto a national level. Obviously pretty much everybody here -aside from some seriously mentally ill individuals- wouldn't want this to be implemented in real life for several obvious reasons but as a kinky fantasy it expands dong.
Mind you, assuming an equal level of competence amongst enforcers, I'd choose this over a chinese-style social credit system. At least then I'd get to have some degenerate fun if the pigs catch me.

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@438cac
Read the name of the domain you are browsing before posting something stupid like that.

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Me: "Oh, that scoring thing is an surprisingly intereresting idea for Girls for M standards. What stories you could do with such a system..."
*Girls have automatic max score and can lower men's score as they like*
Me: "Why did I even expect anything else?"

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damn sad girls for m has ended dont cry cause its over cry because shes twisting your nipples and simultaneously smile cause she's tellin you what a perverted piece of shit for likin it like that

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