Posted on 12 February 2020, 18:28 UTC by: ncc1701z
Score +17
i can't comment on the translation but the font choice, typesetting, grammar and proofreading needs some improvements. also translator/editor information is missing. it seems that this is a first time upload though, so i won't judge. i'm just a reader and there are others more qualified to help with this. that said, please do try to improve. thanks for all the work!