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[Fushinsya_Guilty (Ikue Fuji)] Ushiwakamaru Alter to Saimin de Sukihoudai | Doing What I Want With an Hypnotized Ushiwakamaru Alter (Fate/Grand Order) [English] [Hellsin] [Digital]

[不審者罪 (幾枝風児)] 牛若丸オルタと催眠で好き放題 (Fate/Grand Order) [英訳] [DL版]

Doujinshi
Posted:2020-03-07 21:33
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Language:English  TR
File Size:214.9 MB
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Posted on 07 March 2020, 21:33 UTC by:   Unumbium    PM
Uploader Comment
It´s me again! This time with an FGO translation. I hope it is decent enough for you to enjoy it.
The next one will be with another FGO waifu but I'll think about it.

As always suggestions are welcome.

RAW: /g/1545824/7977916e4c/
DL: https://www.dlsite.com/maniax/work/=/product_id/RJ273247.html
https://www.melonbooks.co.jp/detail/detail.php?product_id=583976&adult_view=1
https://ec.toranoana.jp/tora_r/ec/item/040030791714/
https://fantia.jp/fanclubs/384

Hellsin

PD: Added RAW and DL sites, thanks for the suggestion!
Posted on 07 March 2020, 22:06 UTC by:   Addelheim    PM
Score +32
Only suggestion is to link to the raw and to put the DL link in uploaded comments for ease of access. Beyond that it’s a decent translation I’ll go over it more when I get home to proof read and give suggestions where they can be made.
Posted on 07 March 2020, 22:40 UTC by:   SCSS    PM
Score +21
Should try reading some guides on typesetting. Font sizes are a bit excessive among other things.
Posted on 08 March 2020, 00:13 UTC by:   Danieke    PM
Score +26
I eagerly await the day DW releases a 5-star Minamoto-no-Yoshitune so I can salt about not getting her.
Posted on 08 March 2020, 01:57 UTC by:   Ryuufap    PM
Score +14
The font is fine for me, but too many tl notes can get distracting lol
Posted on 08 March 2020, 03:59 UTC by:   Shitsuji-kun    PM
Score +51
Unnecessary TL notes are unnecessary.
Posted on 08 March 2020, 04:18 UTC by:   Unumbium    PM
Score +4
You are right maybe I should have explained only the "Bond" topic but I thought that there would be people that don't know about some FGO terminologies, so I ended adding the notes. Maybe I could have used less words or just discard them....mmm.
I Took notes about the font size and guides*
Thank your for your opinions I appreciate them :) .
Posted on 08 March 2020, 07:35 UTC by:   nigerian_prince    PM
Score +6
Isn't it custom to put the TL signature at the last page?
Posted on 08 March 2020, 11:49 UTC by:   Sibushang    PM
Score +12
As someone who doesn't play FGO at all, I greatly appreciated the translation notes. Thanks for your hard work. Details are always appreciated.
Posted on 08 March 2020, 14:36 UTC by:   pdadac    PM
Score +37
If you think there's a bunch of terminology that needs explanations in a work, you can create a separate translator's notes page at the end for them. You can be as brief or detailed as you want and there's no risk of it being distracting to readers. Most works don't have enough space on the page to put such notes anyway unlike in this. I really do appreciate you making this consideration for people unfamiliar with the game, don't get me wrong.
Posted on 08 March 2020, 15:40 UTC by:   Harusakii    PM
Score +3
Never played FGO, so I definitely appreciated the TL notes as they clarified a lot of stuff I already sort off assumed after reading the countless other doujinshi.
A TL note page at the end is probably still the best idea, since people familiar with the games are going to be distracted by them.
Posted on 08 March 2020, 21:47 UTC by:   Unumbium    PM
Score +4
Ok I'll use a TL note page next time if needed. But shouldn't it go in the beginning? That way the reader will know ahead before reading... That's how I see it or am I wrong?
Thank you again :) .
Posted on 15 May 2020, 07:05 UTC by:   cd_young    PM
Score +6
Calling a command seal something similar to "Hypnosis" sells the power of command seals short. they are absolute orders a Servant cannot refuse. Hypnosis relies on the Unseen Observer phenomenon, where a person can refuse anything they don't like.

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