Japanese Version: /g/850766/3b4c8fa6c1/
Editing Bounty Posted By: hellwolf
Translation form: https://danbooru.donmai.us/pools/10309
Edit By: Ottogentle

I'm sorry, the gallery title has an extra letter i.
It's my first time to do this work. I'm not good at English. I don't actually know what should I do. If I did something wrong, please tell me. I will be glad to fix mistakes.
The title seems to have been corrected.✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧

Last edited on 11 March 2020, 10:12 UTC.

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Renaissance it's ao de

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very blade of the immortal.

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Thanks for the translation, but there are a few grammatical errors. There are also places where the text bubbles are left blank (pg. 58, panel 2) or untranslated (pg. 52, pnl. 3 and 4, pg. 70, pnl. 1 and 2). Very good for a first attempt, though.

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@onikamikun
Oh god, I forgot those two bubbles. That's really my fault. I did check but didn't find it.
The gallery can't to be changed anymore. Should I upload a fixed version?
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The translated text on page 58 is:
"How are you, human? Why aren't trying to escape?"
"I will at least show you some mercy. Now, let me hear your name."
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Sorry again.

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You should be able to "clone and unlock" your gallery and then replace the pages with their fixed versions. Under "My Uploads", find the gallery and select "Manage" under "Available Actions" on the right.
There is a button above the image box.

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