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most normal people reason is gonna be disgust then police afterward lol
and the father pretty much giveaway the evidence for it.

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work part time to buy smartphone for your sister
>she repay the favor by showing first class NTR peeping spot
>then record the NTR scene with the smartphone

when you thought you can win a favor from your sister but your sister unleashed her NTR master plan

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That's messed up...

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Pathetic MC just kill the father then rape your Sis, Kek. You live in hentai world nobody gonna arrest you anyways.

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HAHAHA MY SIDES

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Kid is such a wimp, just fuck her and beat up the old man.

The sister seems to be way fucked up than I thought if she thought this was good and the old man just doesn't give a shit, he'd probably fuck anything with a hole.

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Sister and Oldman are so happy while the brother is trapped on some kind of selfpity.

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Some people just want to see the world burn.
Some people just want to get cucked.

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kinda hard to get into it when the characters are literally retarded.

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@derbertl You know you can exclude galleries with a specific tag like this right : english -netorare. For example only shows english galleries without the netorare tag.

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If I was her brother. She will have a octuplets penetration a longtime ago.

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@Lehmanncup i didnt know you could exclude tags, how to do so?

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I like how you are lowkey being told the "father" pretty much neglected their education ever since he adopted them. Keep in mind that she thinks she's doing something good - there is no apparent voluntary cruelty in her actions, unlike most girls who get mindbreak/NTR and turn on the MC. She simply doesn't know what she's doing is wrong and he has no idea what's acceptable or not in a family. Most NTR involves "hentai logic" that doesn't make any sense, and usually the MC that gets netorared is just an idiot, but THIS TIME it's much more realistic. They are not stupid, they were just poorly educated by that guy who conditioned them for this to happen one day or another. Not only that, but he also probably is a slacker, maybe he doesn't even have a real job, maybe he's just acting like he's going to work and he's just going out spending MC's hard-earned money while both siblings are doing their best to handle the precarity of their situation. I mean, he won't make a budget and count the bills - she does it all! Overall this might look like an ordinary hentai but it's been well-thought by the author.

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That guy has to be the biggest pussy of every NTR manga worldwide.

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Oh I see, this is one of those "The girl is SO dumb that literally anyone could have gotten her because she doesn´t understand the most basic concept of societal taboos", you kinda feel bad for the brother, but if it wasn't the father in law it was going to be pretty much anyone else who asked first. Hell, it could have been him, but the father in law remembered to say "incest is a no no, sweetie, now suck my dick in front of your brother"
@godscat Looks like you didn´t read that one doujin where the guy gives his wife to some dude they were swinging with, and when his daughter is born and grows up, also gives her up to him and films it.

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Thanks for the translation.
Been a while since I saw a NTR doujin get this much hate..........so it must be a good one! People don't get this butthurt if the NTR is lame after all.......

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@TheDiabolical

To be fair, the undertones in this one probably hit a little too close to home for some people. It's not the usual "Fucked or Raped until I became a cum dump" scenario. It's pretty much implied that the stepfather groomed his older sister from childhood. Now I know what your thinking, "There are literal loli doujins on this site where that happens.", and you're right. LOL

Some people read certain stories and become invested in it's universe and plot disregarding the other crazy scenarios they've seen in other mangas up til now.

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wow this one is surprisingly mess up but at the same time non malicious. The sister was obviously groomed to think this sort of thing was ok by the way she was acting while not being educated correctly. The brother while being disillusioned (due to learning the truth) my heart does somewhat go out for him, and their stepfather this is the type of guy you want to torture slowly for what he has done. Not only did he take advantage of a minor's trust but he turned the sister into his brainwashed cum dump and has groomed her to think this sort of thing (AKA hurt her brother emotionally) is normal while getting his own rocks off.

Plus for those who are saying "kill him and rape/claim the sister" Even if he did this with normal hentai/NTR logic I grantee you they will use that he isn't big enough to sate her and due to what happened with the father she will end up going to the next guy with a big enough dick to do so while doing the emotional abuse all over again.

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For once It'd be enjoyable to see the guy just call the girl disgusting, a whore, something along those lines, and just cut her out of his life, instead of crying and distressing over it. And instead have the girl understand how she just lost someone important to her for her own selfishness. But I guess it wouldn't really be NTR at that point would it? I've seen a (couple out of hundreds) that do this, but it instead turns into "getting back at the girl" instead of just cutting her out of his life, which makes him no better than her.

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instead of being a normal incest doujin no he fuck up with the ntr at the end the only cuck here is the author

cuck the one who give me dislike

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@laconicraven: Not exactly what you're looking for, but there's a Persona 3 doujin where the absolute chad MC just turns his back on the girl (Yukari in this case). Doesn't cry, doesn't say anything, just turns and walks away from her. Probably the only NTR doujin I've seen that has a dude like that lol.

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Dad's happy, sister's happy, the only one unhappy is the freak who wants to bang his sister.

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It's like @moximoore said this one hits home more cause it's not the I became a cum dump type scenario,

But honestly speaking personally, Jokes, memes, all that aside. Something like this is NOT good to read when you're in a slump or you're going through hard times. Reading this almost gave me a full mental breakdown. It's not like i've never read some intense ntr before it's just lately personally my mental health has not been the best and something like this is terrible for me, I found myself yelling at my monitor, slamming my desk to the point where my nose was bleeding and I broke my monitor, and even right now my head is thumping and I fill fueled with rage. I only say all this to say, At the end of the day this might be fiction but to the wrong person it can become their reality.

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this is just.. sad

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The weird thing is it's acting like she's cheating on him when there's no indication they had anything together. Of course, if he was just happy to get to watch, there wouldn't be much of a story...

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@NeoBloom @kyuudere-sama
Why would you comission this and work on this if you can get the version we translated from Haruhiskys patreon for a few dollars. Would have saved both of you time and money.

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I loved this, does anyone know another doujin like this? Im really into the dignified girl with those looks

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>Middle-aged, single Japanese guy with NTR and incest fetish
>Adopts a boy and his sister for his fetish
>Trains the sister as his sex slave in secret
>Leads the sister to believe what they are doing is normal and urges her to show it to her brother
>Keikaku Doori

Last edited on 17 March 2020, 15:44 UTC.

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@Master117

I don't know about another english translation because it seem there isn't any other english version on this place.
I'm still glad to have commissioned to Kyuu who did an excellent work and have it shared it there.

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Most NTR protagonists are 99% like this though and very rarely are some justified like the guy was a douchebag or too young to do anything. However there is also unique ntrs where the MC actually fights back whether or not he wins the girl back, cuz he's just a badass. One great example is the work where the little boy who has a childhood friend whom he has a crush on is being played around by the old Men in the village. Youd think he would be too Young to do anything? But nope, he blew up the entire village

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This mangaka mostly creates sequels to his works so I wouldn't be surprised if this one gets a sequel too, which will inevitably involve the pregnant sister having fun with the father . If the baby is born I bet the MC will be stuck with taking care of it on his own and maybe get a full time job to support his "family". Maybe he could even get a girlfriend at some point and of course then lose her to his father as a further NTR plot.

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the promise is law the next cucks are loplopsama, seeinghighdog, rouge, helabus and huntethan they know they are cucks because they give dislike even when i say so enjoy your cuck day

Well i notice mercurial008(bitch) and Almasy want to join to the cuck club your now in
oh someonee1se to ok your are part of the cucks

Last edited on 21 March 2020, 00:10 UTC.

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Feel like you could definitely get another chapter or two out of this story. Like the brother could finally get fed up and leave without telling either of them and the siblings could have a big shouting match at school or something which would drive a bigger wedge in-between them. Last chapter could be her finding out that he somehow got a girlfriend and possibly slipping into yandere mode to get him back home to satisfy her fetish or he tells her that he'll never think of them as siblings ever again and the story ends with her being completely broken and Daddy selling her off for money.

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Well, i need plottwist

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I dunno, this doesn't really feel that bad compared to how everyone else is reacting. Everyone's talking about how evil the step dad is but I honestly didn't get any particularly bad vibes off of him. Their relationship doesn't seem sinister at all (well at least by hentai incest story standards where banging step family is fine). They make it clear their relationship is consensual and affectionate, the dialog about finding her masturbating seems to imply that their relationship actually started fairly recently, and that he hadn't just been grooming her since she was a kid (he probably wouldn't have been shocked that she was masturbating if he had been), and he seems like a decent dad all things aside. Obviously by real life standards it's a fucked up scenario, but by hentai standards it feels like they're more or less having a vanilla incest story that just happened to have the brother stuff get involved. Also the NTR part feels less intentionally cruel. It feels like they're trying to throw the guy a bone and let him be at least somewhat involved rather than taunting him or anything, plus they're super open and honest about it and don't treat it like something to be ashamed of. As the dad himself pointed out the siblings are actually blood related, so they wouldn't be able to hook up anyways, so it's not like she was going to return his feelings one way or the other. Yeah we know from his perspective that having to watch them have sex is fucked, but his sister doesn't really know that. All she knows is that he's been perving on her lately and probably fapping to her as well, so she seems to be genuine in her intentions to give him more fap material. Given what we've seen of their personalities neither the dad or the sister seem to be actively malicious, and given the concern she shows for him I imagine she'd be genuinely sympathetic if she knew it made him feel bad.

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@ beyblader

Were you born a moron or have you perfected being one in your lifetime?

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@beyblader
Wow idk how you got to that conclusion. First off, it's exactly because Yuina doesn't know her exhibitionism is fucked up, the dad taking advantage of and encouraging it, the brother quietly suffering that makes this whole thing NTR. So I'll sum up all the points I could think of that disproves your opinion:

- It's implied the relationship has been going on for a while because Naoto came home late for 6 months due to part-time work and didn't pay attention during that period.
- Naoto asked the father if it's okay to buy Yuina a smartphone. Dad agrees and promptly uses the new phone to send Naoto nudes. "not actively malicious" you say?
- NTR isn't "intentionally cruel" after Naoto literally complained to the dad he didn't like it then the dad quickly changed subject in the bathroom and proceeded to continue.
- The dad gave off bad vibes because he's developing a fetish between his children; he knows Nao is uncomfortable with the sexual undertones, then encourages Yuina to show off sex in front of him as "masturbatory relief" and "this is what he wants, it's good for him."
- The bathroom sex scene at the end has the father saying let us show Nao our sex later even tho he just protested about it, because he is our precious "family" in quotation marks.

It's a coin toss whether the dad's been grooming Yuina since she was little, but he's certainly been exploiting her naivety since he found her masturbating; it doesn't take much of a logic leap to say he didn't properly educate his kids and normalizing his predatory behavior under "skinship/developing bonds" which left Naoto second-guessing what's right/wrong. That's why it's sinister; both his kids are actively being "cultivated" for the father's NTR fetish, not so much the incest itself.

Their relationship is only considered consensual if you count being misled & not knowing any better as "consensual." He seems to be a decent dad but allows his household finances to be managed by high-schoolers?

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Wow, this is so fucked up.

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I love this So much. Can't Wait for sequel.

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