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(C78) [Tengu no Tsuzura (Kuro Tengu)] Wanna Try? (Neon Genesis Evangelion) [English]

(C78) [天狗のつづら (黒てんぐ)] Wanna Try? (新世紀エヴァンゲリオン) [英訳]

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Posted:2020-03-16 22:09
Parent:1590617
Visible:No (Expunged)
Language:English  TR
File Size:18.74 MB
Length:31 pages
Favorited:158 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.18

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Posted on 16 March 2020, 22:09 UTC by:   weezil    PM
Uploader Comment
I have begun translating recently, so go easy on me. I have a special interest in Neon Genesis Evangelion works and I have waited too long for someone else to translate them. So, I have taken it upon myself to do so and share those fruits with this community. I do this in my spare time (which I have very little of) so it will take time to turn out new works. I am on Patreon under Rogue Weasel, I won't beg but this does take up a chunk of time, but a tiny token would be appreciated
Posted on 17 March 2020, 00:36 UTC by:   Nayas    PM
Score +65
I commend your efforts and those Misato panels are hysterical. Some very obvious things need fixing:
p8 has a dupe; untranslated lines at 18 and 27; 17,21,27,28 have uncropped white space that's not in the raws.

"ひよっとして 君もやりたい じゃない?" at p14 means "Don't you want to do it, too?" Also the Japanese transcription for "Wanna try?" is only needed for Japanese readers, it's only confusing in translation, since all lines are in English.
Posted on 24 March 2020, 22:25 UTC by:   weezil    PM
Score +3
Hey thanks for the help. I just started, and I really don’t know much. The parts with the missing English was just an oversight, I added them back in. I also had to make a new gallery since I don't know how to make changes. I also made the suggested, but this is the best copy I had. Where can I get a better copy to work with? I am not very good at idiomatic expressions and sometimes I have to guess with the best I know. I also just use MS Paint so some cropping and stuff is pretty rough. I did this mainly for myself, but I really like Tengu and thought it would be nice to share it.

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