宫原步居然画ntr了？我的青春结束了

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降智太嚴重~

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有一说一，画风撸点是很够，可是女主心态的变化就实在太ZZ了

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@daqingduizhang
宫原步画了，濑奈阳太郎也开始画ntr了，时代变了。

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仔细对比了一下连载版和单行本

前面3话的对话内容基本全部都修改了一遍

连载版里原本黄毛才是选择了妥协的那个，但是中途开始态度突然转变，女主也没有任何心路变化的描写，就导致原本那个剧情的结局显得十分突兀

单行本改成了黄毛决心要把女主的一切都夺走，女主也被从对3P关系有感觉的淫乱，变成了对黄毛的肉棒更有感觉

改动之后就显得不是那么的突兀了（但结局依旧降智得一批）

根据作者后记里写的，原本是预定男女主在一起，但男主同意让女主和黄毛有肉体关系，在编辑的建议下改成了黄毛将女主的一切都从男主身边夺走

所以说一个烂编辑对作品的影响是真的大（

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噗。。。表情也太dio爷了

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苦主描写得太多了，我是看ero manga的,不是看苦主心路历程的

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这不是我要的ntr这nc剧情属实给👴整吐了

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Definitely Need This in Sub Eng people. That Good Tank and that Good Style. Thanks.

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这编辑就离谱，即便更改对话中间转折依然生硬，如果按照本来的结局，剧情转折和结局可能只是降智而没这么生硬了
编辑建议改结局导致连载版剧情转折很生硬，人物前后内心活动及对话拐了大弯，结果单行本不得不改对话，来使对话内心活动偏向合理，这样你还不如用原来的结局，反正都是降智，一步到位，不改对话就可以出单行本，省心省力不香吗。。。

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这个本画的比之前还要好

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I dunno JP but looks like the guy accepted the relationship of Yuri with sensei, and masturbated to the videos she sends him.
Still, I hope someone translates this so I can have a better idea.

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画风是进步了...但是脑洞依旧没进步....

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could someone explain the end please

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What changed in the 2020-03-23 14:08 update?

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标题真直白

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为什么不试试共享女友啊？我当初就试过，就是和别人一起插女友时很奇怪

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楼上那位的问题，根据作者在推特上的回复，大概是因为根据编辑和问卷调查的综合结果，决定画成男主败犬结局的。如果作者按自己原来的想法画就是共享女友结局

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Miyahara Ayumu's art is as amazing as always. In fact, I feel like it's improved, or at least developed in a direction that's to my liking. That girl's character design is one of the sexiest I've ever seen. Fetish-wise, it's kinda up my alley, but not quite... As far as I'm concerned, NTR/cheating is at its best when the guy getting cucked is oblivious of it.

@icesoul: What's there to explain? The MC gives up when he hears the girl admit to the teacher that she doesn't want to stop. Then he just despairs and faps to the videos that the teacher sends him in order to taunt him (and because the girl enjoys being watched by him, even if it's just through video). For some reason he's not even acting cold towards the girl and pretends to be happy for her, lol. BTW, the wedding scene is no mere dream, she does actually marry the teacher.

Last edited on 25 March 2020, 02:32 UTC.

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@ Krozam
thank you very much for the explain

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I hate this kind of stupid shit. If a women you love getting fucked by some guy, you go in and kick that guy. Don't just stand around and watch. I like the gerne but I look so stupid.

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太大了（指图片）

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